Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mon Gazza

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Mon Gazza

Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 23:38, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Mon ~~Cala~~ what?
Date Archived: 07:18, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
Final word count: 851 words (145 introduction, 632 body, 74 behind the scenes)
WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST, WP:CO, WP:FFGAMES, WP:NOVELS

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~~Could you please add the release date of Star Wars: The Force Awakens Beginner Game? ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 23:57, 15 September 2023 (UTC)~~
- Sorted. Thanks. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 09:09, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

~~Right in the lead quote I'm seeing the planet referred to with the preposition "on", which we generally take to imply that it's a terrestrial world.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 14:27, 18 September 2023 (UTC)
- Sorted. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 20:28, 24 September 2023 (UTC)
~~To me it sounds like the battle at Andara is deserving of an article.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 11:24, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:18, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

~~A brief context for the Pyke Syndicate would be nice.~~ Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:36, 21 September 2023 (UTC)
- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 20:28, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

~~The second clause here is dangling, it implies the CIS began in 22 BBY: "...the Clone Wars between the Republic and the Separatist Alliance, which began in 22 BBY."~~ JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:40, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
- That better? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:18, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:18, 23 October 2023 (UTC)