Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mission to the Vulture's Claw

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Mission to the Vulture's Claw

  • Nominated by: CC7567 (talk) 05:42, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Yet another unexpected, minor TCW event that I didn't foresee.

(3 ACs/7 Users/10 Total)

Support

  1. Nice work CC :) JangFett Talk 11:02, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
  2. Looks great!—Darthtyler (Talk) 20:40, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
  3. Good job :) Jonjedigrandmaster (Jujiggum) 21:01, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
  4. Per IRC review. Kilson Likes PIE 00:51, 01 June 09 (UTC)
  5. I do believe you are very good at writing. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 09:29, 1 June 2009 (UTC)
  6. Nice job. —Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 21:35, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Objections addressed in IRC. Cylka-talk- 23:55, 26 June 2009 (UTC)
  8. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:33, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
  9. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 19:54, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
  10. Good article. Darth Trayus Sith Emblem (Trayus Academy) 22:33, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. The Grand Master
    • Prelude: "as the information stored inside the droid would prove fatal in Confederate hands." Fatal to what?
      • Addressed.
    • Why did Nachkt promise R2 to Grievous? Could a reason be specified somewhere in the article?
      • Addressed.
    • Jonjedigrandmaster (Jujiggum) 20:38, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
      • Thanks for the review. CC7567 (talk) 20:57, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
  2. Small thing: In the main quote, does Kenobi really say our "next" might very well depend on it? I'm not sure that makes sense. I thought he said "necks". Darth Trayus Sith Emblem (Trayus Academy) 01:31, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
    • Actually...yeah, that makes more sense. The episode isn't very clear, but it seems more likely. :P CC7567 (talk) 01:56, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
      • A little while ago I confirmed this with Wild Space, since a lot of the dialogue in the book is taken directly from the episode. CC7567 (talk) 22:46, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments

  • For general info/interest, the article is about 989 words according to Microsoft Word, so just below the FA requirement. CC7567 (talk) 04:21, 2 June 2009 (UTC)
  • Having finally read Wild Space, I've realized that some continuity troubles have been introduced. I've done the best I could, but the novel has really disrupted the events between itself and the episode. Or the changes could be minor, but are just giving me a bad headache. In any case, the {{Twoconflicting}} tag is now up there, as well as for the Mission to suspected Confederate space and the Mission to Skytop Station—although it's really this event that was affected the most, as you can now see from the painstakingly long Bts. CC7567 (talk) 06:22, 5 June 2009 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:49, 30 June 2009 (UTC)