Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mission to Daluuj

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Mission to Daluuj

  • Nominated by: Menkooroo 14:13, July 17, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My first event nom. Please, tear it apart.

(5 ACs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Much better than my first event nom. This one is likely going to pass. :P Kilson(Let's have a chat) 00:58, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote I had to fix a few mistakes that really shouldn't be present in an article whose author has as much experience as you do, Menk. Please be more careful in the future. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 13:28, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
    • Yeah, those were some embarrassing oversights. :S My humblest apologies. Menkooroo 18:18, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 13:49, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 02:40, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Very nice. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 23:53, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Kilson
  • Reload the infobox.
    • Done.
  • You should mention the Second Imperial Civil War in the Intro.
    • Good call. Added.
  • That being said, you should probably cut down the Intro a bit, especially the second paragraph. The level of detail you gave is good for the body, but not in the Intro.
    • You're right. I've done some trimming and cut out some specific details (195 kb worth!). Not sure if any more can go, but let me know if you think it can.
      • No, I think it's a fair size now.
  • Otherwise, good job Menk. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 22:10, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
    • Thank ya! Menkooroo 02:51, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:53, August 3, 2011 (UTC)