- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Millaflower Toast
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:01, 20 November 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Nice to see them using stuff from the cookbooks in the park
- Date Archived: 15:59, 28 November 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 453 words (73 introduction, 245 body, 135 behind the scenes)
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Support
- Bonzane10
(holonet) 08:24, 22 November 2023 (UTC) 
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:48, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 20:05, 26 November 2023 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 01:48, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
- Booply (talk) 15:57, 28 November 2023 (UTC)
Object
Bon
I think it's worth mentioning that the bread served at Oga's is thinner than the one seen in the cookbook.Bonzane10 (holonet) 05:07, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:05, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
Anil
I think the second paragraph in History has some wrong citations. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:54, 24 November 2023 (UTC)
- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:26, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
Would it be appropriate to list Black Spire and/or Batuu in the "Found on" field in the infobox? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:02, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:26, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
spookly
Two super minor things, but: thoughts on moving the moof milk cheese to animal-based ingredients? I think there should be precedent for it.- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:42, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
More of a query than a proper objection since I'm not fussed either way, but was fiddling around with it a bit for fun, and it seems like the BtS happens to be big enough to fit a 200ishpx image of the cookbook cover, or any other relevant image down there, since it's two paragraphs. If you think it'd be too cluttery though can also see that.—spookywillowwtalk 01:25, 27 November 2023 (UTC)- I tried out a few images there, but with the large body image directly above it they always ended up looking a bit crowded and since everything I could think of was tangentally relevant at best anyway I didn't think it was worth it to include something just for the sake of another image. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:42, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
- Makes sense.—spookywillowwtalk 01:48, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
- I tried out a few images there, but with the large body image directly above it they always ended up looking a bit crowded and since everything I could think of was tangentally relevant at best anyway I didn't think it was worth it to include something just for the sake of another image. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:42, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
Comments
- Should have mentioned when I first posted the nom, please don't remove the menu archivedates as they're for the specific temporary Life Day menu rather than the one standard one in the module which doesn't include the Millaflower Toast. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:26, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
- Oh, I didn't think about the fact that the Toast is also going to be removed from the page in January. Sorry about that. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:48, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
- Oh, I didn't think about the fact that the Toast is also going to be removed from the page in January. Sorry about that.
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:58, 28 November 2023 (UTC)