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Midgor
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:29, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 14:43, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 322 words (72 introduction, 228 body, 22 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST, WP:NOVELS
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
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Support
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:30, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 07:22, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 18:36, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 18:40, 4 August 2023 (UTC)- Tomotron
Sith Council 09:45, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
Object
Imp
"The system had a pale-green sun which made it give off a jade light" — so, to confirm, the star made the system glow? Or is that meant to still talk about the star itself?- "there was a one in three chance Wyl could find Shadow Wing waiting in the pale-green light of Midgor's sun." "Wyl's harness dug into his chest as stars fell into place and the jade light of Midgor winked form the darkness." suggests that the system just had a green glow to it.
An article for electromagnetic syphon?Imperators II(Talk) 07:34, 3 August 2023 (UTC)- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 00:40, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:43, 5 August 2023 (UTC)