Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Masamu

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Masamu

• Nominated by: Stake black ^msg 11:41, 4 October 2025 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 17:26, 15 October 2025 (UTC)
• Final word count: 482 words (73 introduction, 377 body, 32 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 467 words (72 introduction, 363 body, 32 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:VISIONS, WP:NOVELS

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Support votes

1. CometSmudge (talk) 22:56, 9 October 2025 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 00:06, 11 October 2025 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 00:37, 11 October 2025 (UTC)
4. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 01:50, 15 October 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Comet

• The second biography paragraph is long enough that I think it should be split
• There are several contractions that should be fully written out instead
• Dekien should have context, and Hanrai doesn't need to be directly quoted when he mentions it
• The intro says he was in Hanrai's study when Yuehiro was brought in, but he was actually waiting outside it CometSmudge (talk) 19:56, 9 October 2025 (UTC)
  • Done. Stake black ^msg 20:42, 9 October 2025 (UTC)

spookly

• The article body uses the term "aide" which would seem to imply Category:Clerical workers and assistants is a better fit, per its category description, than Category:Servants. Or, if servant is indeed what the source is more closely reflecting, then the prose should state "servant" instead of aide.—spookywilloww^talk 17:00, 10 October 2025 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Stake black ^msg 21:03, 10 October 2025 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• "when and what Yuehiro looked into in Hanrai's files" When you word it this way, "Yuehiro looked into in Hanrai's files" needs to work with both "when" and "what" separately. "when Yuehiro looked into in Hanrai's files" doesn't make sense, so you'd need to rework this sentence. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 03:16, 14 October 2025 (UTC)
  • Tried rewording it. How's that? Stake black ^msg 05:14, 14 October 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:50, 15 October 2025 (UTC)