- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Marka
- Nominated by: Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:32, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Guest nom for WP:NSW.
(3 ACs/5 Users/8 Total)
Support
- Nice combo of noms. :P -- 1358 (Talk) 05:03, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:54, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
- Pre-nom reviewed. —Master Jonathan
(Jedi Council Chambers) 17:59, June 2, 2010 (UTC) - --Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:17, June 8, 2010 (UTC)
Ragnos? Chack Jadson (Talk) 16:59, June 12, 2010 (UTC)- Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 23:53, June 25, 2010 (UTC) - CC7567 (talk) 21:19, June 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Apologies for the late strike. I've been taking a hiatus of sorts from the GAN page recently. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 12:19, June 27, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Soresu
I think it should be mentioned more specifically how she disobeyed Lod's orders; after all, you do it in the other noms, despite their relatively lower relevance.SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 10:42, June 9, 2010 (UTC)- Please try it. Thanks for the review!--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:25, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
FJM
In the intro, you say that it was during the end of the NSW, but in the body, you say that these events took place prior to the NSW. I get what you're saying, but it's not super clear. Please change one of them.Chack Jadson (Talk) 16:48, June 10, 2010 (UTC)- It should have read "in the final decades of the New Sith Wars." My mistake, and corrected.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:54, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
I don't usually object to something like this, but I'm finding that the intro is getting to be rather PBP and has a bit choppy wording. Please see if you can somehow weave the standalone sentences into something with more flow.- Please try it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 10:20, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Just so you know, I was looking for something more along the lines of this, so that it's less choppy like "she did this" and "he did that." I don't want to hold up the nomination by continually objecting to something minor like this, but please try to look out for this in the future. CC7567 (talk) 21:19, June 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Got it, will do. Thanks for the advice.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:12, June 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Just so you know, I was looking for something more along the lines of this, so that it's less choppy like "she did this" and "he did that." I don't want to hold up the nomination by continually objecting to something minor like this, but please try to look out for this in the future. CC7567 (talk) 21:19, June 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Please try it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 10:20, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
Is there any chance that some of the uses of "take her with the Sith" and "take her with them" can be reworded? It's a bit overused at the moment.CC7567 (talk) 07:04, June 24, 2010 (UTC)- Please try it. Thanks for the review, CC.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 10:20, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:50, June 27, 2010 (UTC)