Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mantooine Medallion

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Mantooine Medallion

• Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:28, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 02:52, 14 January 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 472 words (99 introduction, 316 body, 57 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:FFGAMES, WP:DEFIANCE ??

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 04:23, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:26, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 00:13, 5 January 2024 (UTC)
4. X-Wing LOVE. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:34, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
5. Panther436 (talk) 02:50, 14 January 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• I think you could include an image somewhere in description, maybe the Rebel Alliance starbird? Lewisr (talk) 18:45, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:28, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
• Context for Mantooine needed in the history Lewisr (talk) 18:45, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:28, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
• Release date for the game not citable to the game? Lewisr (talk) 18:45, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
  • I looked at gameplay and there's no publication year in the credits. All images of the disc hardcase are too low quality, and it's definitely not on the cover. I'd feel more comfortable keeping the source currently on there. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:28, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
    • It appears to be citable to the packaging, so I cleaned that up Lewisr (talk) 00:43, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
      • Ah okay, thank you! Appreciate it. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:52, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
• I think the intro could use a date Lewisr (talk) 03:57, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Added, also added to infobox --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:50, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
• Looking at other SAs which link to the Imperial calendar page (Arbitrator, Onager-class Star Destroyer, Mass Shadow Generator, and Torpedo Sphere for example) these all convert their AFE date to BBY, which I think should be kept consistent here too Lewisr (talk) 03:57, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Converted --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:50, 30 December 2023 (UTC)

Uber

• It's obvious enough but is it worth noting the shared name with Mantooine?
  • I don't think it's necessary to note that given the amount of context with the mentions of the Mantooine resistance, battle of Mantooine, etc. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:38, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
• "and was considered a more simple award compared to other more prestigious awards." Does the source use this wording?
  • It uses "A simple decoration in comparison to other, more presitgious awards..." --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:38, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Please reword and go with the source in that case. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:25, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Removed "considered" --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:02, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
• X-Wing used the "Mantooine Medallion" name, can you confirm where the "Mantooine medal of bravery" name comes from? If it's another source, this has to be documented in the BTS.
  • Came from Lead by Example. I noted it now. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:38, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
    • I noticed the Legends page uses a different capitalization, can you also confirm this in that source? UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:25, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Fixed Legends article --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:02, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
• Review note: Eliminated the subsectioning since there are only three paragraphs, hope that's fine. Also, since "agent" is often used informally, avoid linking to it unless a source explicitly uses it as a title e.g. Agent Kallus. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:01, 5 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Sounds good, thanks --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:38, 13 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:52, 14 January 2024 (UTC)