Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mal

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Mal

• Nominated by: Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 22:33, June 6, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another frustrated CSF cop during the Cold War... what's new?

(3 ACs/5 Users/8 Total)

Support

1. Hanzo Hasashi 03:13, June 10, 2012 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:24, June 15, 2012 (UTC)
3. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:04, July 2, 2012 (UTC)
4. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 14:21, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
5. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:12, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
6. Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 07:09, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
7. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:22, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
8. Nice.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 14:41, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Hanzo

• Perhaps you should write the year in his article? Also "the player accepts the light side mission" sounds like that is unskippable, but from the gameplay mechanics, it sounds like player's choice. I'm assuming it is player's choice, in which case it needs to be reworded. Hanzo Hasashi 14:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
  • Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 02:18, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Cav

• A mention in the BTS of which classes can undertake this mission would be nice. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:02, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
  • Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 03:10, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Trayus

• I don't know that this is a trend with any other TOR articles of yours, but be sure to source the "around 3643 BBY" date. It's not provided in the game, so you'll have to get it from somewhere else. Check out my date sourcing on Jace Malcom, specifically reference number 25—it may be overly thorough, but it's accurate. Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 03:14, June 25, 2012 (UTC)
  • Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 19:29, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• Since the mission is not necessarily a part of the Jedi Knight storyline, I'm not sure you should use that in the source for the year.
  • It should have said "Republic" storyline. The source is still the name but I removed the Jedi Knight part.
• I thought the player could tell Nik that Ria was leaving him without gaining dark side points. I seem to remember that the only way to get dark side points is to force Ria to come back. You might want to check on this, because I'm not entirely sure.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 14:28, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
  • Yep, you're right. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 17:55, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:22, July 23, 2012 (UTC)