- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Magda Keto
- Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 04:27, July 9, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: More Floyd! More TOTJ! Yes!
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Menkooroo 02:29, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
—Tommy 9281 05:09, July 25, 2010 (UTC)- Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 01:21, August 2, 2010 (UTC) 
Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 11:05, August 2, 2010 (UTC)- -- 1358 (Talk) 18:12, August 2, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Toprawa
These "Unknowns" and question marks need to be removed from the succession box. That's just as bad as speculation. Just state what information the source gives you.Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:05, July 14, 2010 (UTC)- Addressed. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:48, July 15, 2010 (UTC)
The Keto the city
Only the infobox mentions her species and gender --- can you go for it in the intro and body?- Added.
There's two "eventually"s used in close succession at the end of the bio's first paragraph. Can you change it up?- Removed the first one.
- S'all I got! Good good job. Menkooroo 15:14, July 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:59, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
Xd1358
"who, along with" is used twice in the beginning of the intro. Please reword one of them.- Reworded.
The first sentence of the intro and the bio are almost identical, especially the latter part of the sentence: "...Lord Keto, ruled the Empress Teta system in the years leading up to the Great Sith War." and "...Lord Keto, the ruler of the Empress Teta system in the years leading up to the Great Sith War." Please reword.- Addressed.
- Make sure to pipelink TOTJ in the future; the article is actually located at Star Wars: Tales of the Jedi. Otherwise, good work. -- 1358 (Talk) 16:55, August 2, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 18:10, August 2, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:49, August 2, 2010 (UTC)