Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Maeve Cuilinn

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Maeve Cuilinn

  • Nominated by: DarthSkyll (talk) 17:47, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 23:44, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 694 words (71 introduction, 583 body, 40 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:05, 20 February 2024 (UTC)
  2. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 13:39, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 22:29, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
  4. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 23:38, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
  5. —SnowedLightning (they/she) 23:43, 11 March 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • The start of the biography should be reordered a bit to indicate Maeve was on Jedha before you start talking about the Togruta. Lewisr (talk) 21:31, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Context for the Path of the Open Hand needed, or it's not really clear why they/Whool would have distrust towards her and the Order. Lewisr (talk) 21:31, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
  • The captions for the images should be amended so that they are more relevant to Maeve. Lewisr (talk) 21:31, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
  • I think it's worth including a small bit about Keth and Whool talking about Maeve's attempts to help him when they are at Enlightenment. Lewisr (talk) 21:31, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Where does her being 'young' come from? From what I see, the story only mentions that she looks no older than Keth does, from his own POV, which is more what it should say, and if there's any indication of Keth's own age. Lewisr (talk) 21:31, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Rather than saying the Jedi was unfamiliar with the Path, since that's a bit speculative, you could just instead say that when he refused her help she was confused why and tried to find an explanation from the crowd. Lewisr (talk) 21:31, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
  • You should also note that she was able to recognise that her presence was causing Whool's distress and therefore backed away. Lewisr (talk) 21:31, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
  • In the intro you say the story is in 382 BBY, but the body says around 382 BBY. This needs to be consistent. Lewisr (talk) 21:31, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
    • All addressed DarthSkyll (talk) 20:10, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
      • I still think the captions need further amending. The 3rd image especially doesn't have much relevance unless it can be made to. I think the bit her recognising her presence was causing the distress is also worth noting in the personality section Lewisr (talk) 01:53, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
        • I reworded the third image and expanded the intro and Personality section. DarthSkyll (talk) 10:37, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Since the story takes place between the Path arriving on Jedha (meaning it's after Path of Deceit) and Keth's death during the Battle of Jedha, the story can be dated in 382 BBY. Lewisr (talk) 01:53, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
  • I think the intro should include her attempts to help Whool and then mention that becaue of his beliefs he reacted in the way he did Lewisr (talk) 01:53, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Unsourced field in the infobox Lewisr (talk) 01:53, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
  • The sectioning in the biography needs to be worked on. It should be 2+2 per section instead of 3+1 Lewisr (talk) 01:53, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Context for the Church of the Force needed Lewisr (talk) 01:53, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
Anil
  • (Reviewing note) Per the Manual of Style, image captions that constitute full sentences should receive a period at the end.
  • I think the Togruta driver might warrant their own article, which would cause a red link in this article. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:51, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
Uber
  • "When the Path of the Open Hand member Whool did not want her help, she was confused, and it was hard for her to accept it. She tried to find an explanation from the crowd for why." This part could use some more clarification. What was hard for her to accept, and what explanation did she seek? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:27, 4 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:44, 11 March 2024 (UTC)