Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Maer

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Maer

• Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 05:33, December 14, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Seeing he could easily be given 250+ words

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. JangFett ^(Talk) 15:03, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:21, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
3. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 21:51, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
4. Short and sweet.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 22:30, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
5. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 05:23, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Jangsworth

• I would tweak the first sentence of the intro a bit. It sounds like corporal would be a specie type, which is incorrect. Instead, could you say that he had the rank of corporal in the Alliance? JangFett ^(Talk) 15:27, December 14, 2012 (UTC)
  • Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:49, December 14, 2012 (UTC)
    • And yes I have Classic ESB man. JangFett ^(Talk) 15:03, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
      • FWIW this is from IRC, I was looking for this guy, and I found out he wasn't in it. Thanks anyway. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:27, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Toprawa

• I have some issues with the way the BTS is worded. I don't think it's accurate to group both of those cards together and say he was first mentioned in both of them. He was only first mentioned on one of them -- the Premiere card. That should be clearly defined first, and then go into mentioning his subsequent sources.
  • Done.
• Given his basic appearance, it would be fair to call him a "humanoid," which I feel should be mentioned in the infobox, intro, and body. Likewise, the "unidentified species" category should be replaced with the humanoid category. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:08, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
  • Taken care of. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 05:16, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:37, December 21, 2012 (UTC)