Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Madurrin

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Madurrin

  • Nominated by: Protectorate (talk) 01:01, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Apparently not an inaugural member?

(0 ACs/1 Users/1 Total)

Support

  1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:49, February 11, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Winterz
  • Alright first things first. Go to your "My preferences" (top page) and in "Gadgets" select to "Highlight all redirects orange". It's one of the most important and practical tools around here and now you are ready to fix all the redirects in the page. Remember that pipelinking is most of the times disencouraged unless you're dealing with a link to an article with a conjectural name (like it happens with several battles).
    • Hah, way cool. Did not know about that.
  • Reload infobox.
    • Done.
  • The first intro sentence should be expanded.
    • Merged it with the second sentence.
  • In the body you never directly refer to Madurrin as a female or Jedi Knight. Correct this.
    • Added
  • Double refs is again disencouraged unless you're dealing with special cases (most of these occasions occurr in the Bts) so please get rid of those you think are unimportant.
    • I'm not seeing any double refs in the BtS. The double ref in the personality and traits is I think, necessary to confirm that she fought throughout the war and not as only a one-time engagement. The double ref in the infobox is needed to confirm that the picture from the book is actually this character.
      • Nevermind then ;)
  • It was just a quick glance but it's looking good. Keep it up. I'll continue after these are complied with. Also, note my brief copy-edit and see the mistakes. Winterz (talk) 20:17, January 16, 2014 (UTC)
    • Thanks for taking a look. I appreciate it. Protectorate (talk) 20:36, January 16, 2014 (UTC)
  • Since you have a few sources thrown there you might as well source the entire Bts section ;). Winterz (talk) 13:31, January 21, 2014 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • You need to add context for quite a lot of stuff. At a glance this includes Yavin IV, Luke Skywalker, Mon Adapyne and Contruum Six. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:18, February 10, 2014 (UTC)
    • Gave some context to those that you listed and some other vague areas.
  • The sentence "The New Republic was gathering there to set up an ambush of Yuuzhan Vong forces based on Ebaq 9 being a hyperspace dead end ideal for trapping starships" doesn't read right. I think it needs to be reworded. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:18, February 10, 2014 (UTC)
    • Gave it a reword. Is that any better?
  • There are several links that need to be added including moon, hyperspace and planet. Luke Skywalker is also linked twice in the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:18, February 10, 2014 (UTC)
    • Good catch. Let me know of any I missed.
  • Her skin color can be added to the P&t and the infobox based on the conclave picture. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:18, February 10, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • According to Destiny's Way, she's actually over four meters tall, as ridiculous as that seems.
  • Your quotes are missing a lot punctuation.
  • I believe we have a citation template for the old SW Message Boards... if not, it needs to use {{WebCite}}.
  • Looks like this one's up to around 1100 words... to the FAN! Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 20:52, February 13, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

  1. ACvote Article is currently 1,111 words by my count, which means it needs to go to FAN, per rule 17. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:20, February 24, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 23:27, February 24, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 18:22, February 26, 2014 (UTC)