Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ma'alkerrite ape-man

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Ma'alkerrite ape-man

  • Nominated by: --Eyrezer (talk) 09:01, August 27, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I have it on good authority Ma'alkerrite will appear in the next Altas update.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 12:14, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Say it with me: "Take your stinking paws off me, you…" ~SavageBOB sig 13:06, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 19:50, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:57, October 17, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:54, October 17, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 21:10, October 17, 2012 (UTC)
  7. Plagueis327 (talk) 23:17, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa
  1. As a preliminary objection, may I inquire whether it's possible to cite a specific article from The Dark Forces Saga, as there appears to be different URLs for each "part?" Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:45, September 22, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Intro objections. Although the previous sentence gives a general time frame for the Galactic Civil War, can we designate a specific year for the intro's second sentence? Example: "Several ape-men were present in a cantina on the planet Toprawa in the year 0 ABY..."
  3. Also, for clarification's sake, since the concluding intro sentence refers to Storm as a "boy," might we also refer to him as the "young" Human Havet Storm? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:53, October 1, 2012 (UTC)
    • Sure to both. --Eyrezer (talk) 01:49, October 7, 2012 (UTC)
      • Thanks. I changed "bar-goer" to "patrons," which I just think reads more formally. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:57, October 17, 2012 (UTC)
Code-8's report
  • The last sentence of the intro doesn't really say that the apes surrounded the boy. Could you find a way of rewording it then I'll support. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 06:28, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:12, October 17, 2012 (UTC)