- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Lyunesi
- Nominated by: --Eyrezer 09:28, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A species hunted by Boba Fett. Thanks to Borsk and Cav for supplying some sources.
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- Skippy having a look
Bio: Frail? You mean physically fragile, mentally fragile, easily broken, infirm...? Could you please give more info?S&C: "Skill" used twice in a row. Please replace one.- In the galaxy: Any further information on Dinnid's death? The previous sentences suggest that the Shell Hutts were happy with Dinnid's services. Was he executed for some reason, or accidentally?...
- Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:59, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
- 1: It literally only says "the frail species". 2: Fixed. 3: I will see what I can do. --Eyrezer 10:49, December 1, 2009 (UTC)
- Soresu
- Why is there nothing about Boba Fett and his apparent hunts of the Lyunesi? Looks like it could be expanded upon.
- Otherwise, an interesting article. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 01:17, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
- Prepare to be savaged...
- In addition to the above from Skippy and SoresuMakashi, can you clarify what you mean in the lead section about how their homeworld was "consumed in intense competition"? Does this mean consumed in the way we use it to mean we are "consuming" the earth by not recycling, etc.? Or do you mean "consumed" as in "dominated by," like "he was consumed with passion"? ~ SavageBob 06:08, December 6, 2009 (UTC)
- I'm away for about a week, but will get onto these objections on my return. --Eyrezer 23:09, December 27, 2009 (UTC)
- In addition to the above from Skippy and SoresuMakashi, can you clarify what you mean in the lead section about how their homeworld was "consumed in intense competition"? Does this mean consumed in the way we use it to mean we are "consuming" the earth by not recycling, etc.? Or do you mean "consumed" as in "dominated by," like "he was consumed with passion"? ~ SavageBob 06:08, December 6, 2009 (UTC)
Comments
Vote to remove nomination (AC only)
Nearly all unaddressed objections meet the idle criteria for removal. Nominator hasn't edited the article in well over a month, and a talk page message left for the nominator on Saturday went unanswered despite the nominator having edited since then. We have a lot of noms to wade through and other nominators waiting eagerly for people to review their work too. Move it or lose it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:22, January 11, 2010 (UTC)- Grunny (Talk) 23:28, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
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