Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Lozz Beraf

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Lozz Beraf

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:41, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The Galactic Tales series continues
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 18:38, 22 May 2022 (UTC)
  2. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 17:29, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:42, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:27, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
  5. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:12, 24 September 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • Is it necessary to provide context for Ree-Di again in the second paragraph? I feel like it only makes the sentence less fluent.
    • Forgot she's mentioned there, removed.
  • In the intro, "led" doesn't seem like the correct verb to me. How about something like: "forced Grevious to leave the ship"? LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 09:05, 21 May 2022 (UTC)
    • I don't see an issue with that verb - it's completely accurate. Added that detail, though. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:09, 22 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:12, 24 September 2022 (UTC)