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Lonto

  • Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 04:26, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: They're so cool. I hope we see them again soon.
  • Date Archived: 18:51, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 690 words (103 introduction, 546 body, 41 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR, WP:COMICS

(4 ACs/0 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Would be nice to see them again Lewisr (talk) 18:41, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:23, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Nice work! TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:48, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 18:50, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • (Reviewing note) Not sure if you are familiar with the Wook gadgets available on Special:Preferences#mw-prefsection-gadgets, but one of them automatically highlights all redirects orange, allowing us to easily spot and fix them.
  • (Reviewing note) I have removed Category:Religious organizations from the page since Category:Force-based organizations is already a subcategory of that.
  • (Reviewing note) As Wook articles are presented as "historical recordings" with a formal language, please refrain from using contracted forms ("shouldn't," "didn't," etc.).
    • Thanks for all of these, definitely didn't know about the gadgets. Panther436 (talk) 19:35, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
  • As far as I can see {{PhaseIIDate}} dates Path of Deceit to "around" 382 BBY, not to that exact year.
    • Added a new explanation, but I will admit it's a little long-winded. If you or anyone else can find a way to say it more concisely/clearly, be my guest. Panther436 (talk) 19:35, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
  • I think "Peace and Unity"'s illustrator should also be documented in BTS as the comic depicts a member of the group for the first time. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 12:38, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
    • Usually just the writer is fine for comic issues but I added it. Panther436 (talk) 19:35, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
      • I think it depends if the visuals in the comic are relevant to the subject or not. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:44, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
  • (Reviewing note) I have replaced the first image in History with an unaltered and higher resolution version since the text in the speech bubbles should not be removed if it isn't cut off per the image policy. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:44, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
Lew
  • The info about the Path's petition for the Convocation to disband is intro exclusive Lewisr (talk) 16:33, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Susalee is also present for when the Convocation discuss about the bombing of the Temple of the Kyber, so I think that's worth briefly touching on Lewisr (talk) 16:44, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Added both, thanks! Panther436 (talk) 21:16, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
      • Correction, now they are added, thought I had saved the edit before but I hadn't. Panther436 (talk) 01:41, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
        • I did wonder what happened there:P But thanks! Lewisr (talk) 23:31, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
  • After some discussion with another AC, and using the examples on Sisterhood of the Beatific Countenance and Guardians of the Breath, it was concluded that you should combine the religion and skills & training section into a description section. And then to merge the members section into the history, since it's a bit redundant overall to the history, and in this case we just have the one member Lewisr (talk) 23:11, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Merged the sections. And I made sure I saved the edit this time lol Panther436 (talk) 03:56, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
      • Hahah thanks! Lewisr (talk) 18:41, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
spookly
  • Unless I'm missing it, Susalee and Vlidar Mac's first pronoun usages aren't sourceable to the sources they're currently referenced to in the body's prose. But they should be sourceable to THR 4 and THR 2 respectively, for each of them, and since those two refs are already used elsewhere it doesn't result in extra usages luckily.—spookywillowwtalk 00:58, 9 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:50, 10 August 2023 (UTC)