Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Lontar

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Lontar

  • Nominated by: Eyrezer 03:36, July 22, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The Blood Carvers meet their match

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 00:04, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
  2. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 22:17, August 6, 2010 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Grunny (talk) 01:44, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Looks fine to me. The first two sentences in the intro could be connected for better flow, but that's more of a personal preference and it doesn't detract from the article as it is. Trak Nar Ramble on 04:06, August 10, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Objection addressed in IRC. SinisterSamurai 04:54, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Moffship
  • In the intro, you mention that the Lontars "achieved sentience," implying that, at one point, they were not sentient. If this is the case, it needs to be mentioned in the body; if this is not the case, it needs to be reworded.
  • That's all. Good work. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 17:01, August 2, 2010 (UTC)
    • I'm happy to change the intro to "The Lontars were a sentient species" if you feel it is warranted. However, just to explain, my understanding of evolution in the GFFA is that all species evolved or developed or achieved sentience, so this was just an attempt to add some variety to the wording. --Eyrezer 21:51, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 08:05, August 10, 2010 (UTC)