Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Lillibanca

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Lillibanca

• Nominated by: Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 02:06, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP: Novels

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Samonic 11:06, 17 July 2022 (UTC)
2. TK-462 (talk) 22:21, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:52, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
4. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:03, 4 October 2022 (UTC)
5. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:24, 11 October 2022 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• Right away, title needs to be bolded in the intro.
  • Done.
• Please implement the Oxford comma.
  • Fixed.
• Context on Han Solo, the Falcon, Kashyyyk, and Jagged Fel.
  • Added.
    • Still missing for Solo.
    • I'd still like to see who Solo is mentioned as opposed to just what he was doing during these events.
      • Added what he was described as in the dramatis personae section at the intro of the book. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 04:29, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
• Your last two paragraphs are too small and should probably be merged.
  • Merged
• A little more context on what the heck the Battle of Kashyyyk was would be appreciated.
  • Added.
• Duplicate link.
  • Removed.
• Your C+C quote seems like it can go in History, which is a more important section than C+C anyway.
  • Moved.
• Random House audiobook is missing from the appearances section, and since we outlawed the other ones, it should be the only one reference there. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:59, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Course I used the wrong one. Fixed. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 03:29, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
• Jedi Order is not the correct link for Jedi - that's referring to an organization, not an individual Jedi.
  • Changed to Jedi Knight.
• Was Kashyyyk controlled by the GA? If so, that seems relevant to add when discussing the Confed's attempts to seize it. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:48, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Added. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 00:02, 20 May 2022 (UTC)

Samonic

• Are quotes formatted correctly? Ship names are usually italicized.— Samonic 06:38, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
  • WP:QUOTE: "In quote templates, emphasis is achieved by removing italics." 1358 ^(Talk) 10:31, 19 May 2022 (UTC)

Brahabanca

• I think some further context for Han Solo would be beneficial. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:55, 19 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Added additional context. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 00:02, 20 May 2022 (UTC)

Ecks

• I feel like the intro could use some expansion with one or two sentences regarding its involvement on Kashyyyk. 1358 ^(Talk) 22:09, 30 May 2022 (UTC)
  • This good? Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 21:58, 10 June 2022 (UTC)

CC-8

• It's a small thing, but the intro says that the ship took part in the Battle of Kashyyyk in the first sentence, while the body only says it was involved in the aftermath Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:44, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 04:41, 1 October 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• No other available quotes relevant to this ship. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 02:06, 19 May 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:24, 11 October 2022 (UTC)