- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Lassicar
- Nominated by: Cade
Calrayn 18:50, October 4, 2013 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Project Hero keeps on moving forward :P
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- 501st dogma(talk) 00:07, October 12, 2013 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 02:04, October 16, 2013 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:41, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 20:59, November 1, 2013 (UTC)- Supreme Emperor (talk) 18:42, November 2, 2013 (UTC)
Object
501st
"Lassicar's men set up turrets in the caves and injured Narezz when she arrived, and Lassicar had begun to negotiate the Jedi's surrender via hologram when the Hero of Tython arrived, destroying the turrets just before Lassicar's Guardsmen arrived and leveled their blasters at the Jedi." Way too many arrives here.501st dogma(talk) 20:49, October 11, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
It would appear there is enough info to create articles for Lassicar's parents, which should then be linked in the article.- Redlinked for now.
I think the second Bio paragraph could use a paragraph break.- Done.
I would prefer to see some kind of description for the P/T quote caption instead of just "Lassicar."- Done.
- Bah, I'm sorry. I meant the image caption. You can put the quote caption back to how you had it. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:15, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
- Done.
The P/T doesn't need to repeat the fact that he's a Human male, since the Bio already establishes this. See if you can't rework the first P/T sentence to excise that bit- Done.
I moved the P/T sentence about his armor into the Equipment, where it belongs, but it's now rather redundant with the Equipment section's secondary mention of his armor on Hoth. Try to combine those two sentences.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:02, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:55, November 2, 2013 (UTC)