Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Larrim (second nomination)

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Larrim

• Nominated by: SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 20:00, 28 December 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 00:35, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 896 words (100 introduction, 672 body, 124 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:KOTOR

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 18:34, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:42, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
3. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:48, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:39, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
5. Fan26 (Talk) 00:28, 16 January 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• You'll need a relevant pronouns category Lewisr (talk) 00:41, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
• Would Category:Business owners and executives be applicable? Lewisr (talk) 00:41, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
• I think you could make a page for Larrim's kiosk Lewisr (talk) 00:41, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Added. The "corporate" tag on his infobox was removed since he's not part of a specific company, but I think a kiosk that buys and sells counts as a business. Think I should re-add the tag? SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 16:32, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
    • In this case I'd probably say no, it's a pretty minor little kiosk thing Lewisr (talk) 04:11, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
• Just a quick question since you had cited Taris being in the Outer Rim to the game on Ada's father but here you do to another source, is it citable to the game? If not then would appreciate if you'd add the same source onto Ada's father Lewisr (talk) 00:41, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
  • The game does say it, but its a little bit indirect and questionable. I think it makes more sense to use a concrete source. Added to Ada's father as well. SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 16:32, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Agreed it makes more sense to use a more concrete source and thanks for adding onto the other! Lewisr (talk) 04:11, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Just an updated note, it can be cited to the game per its opening crawl, so removed the extra ref (was done on Ada's father also) Lewisr (talk) 07:11, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
        • Thanks, missed that cuz I was looking for dialogue :P SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 16:13, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
• Can you just confirm where in the game it's confirmed Larrim is a male? Just watched over the section and wasn't seeing anything Lewisr (talk) 04:32, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
  • The game files for Twi'lek heads mark them as "Twilek_M" and "Twilek_F," Larrim uses the Twi'lek_M model. SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 16:13, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Thanks! Seems in that case you'll need to reference it like you did on Unidentified Jedi Master (Endar Spire) Lewisr (talk) 18:43, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Done. I'll remember to do that for future noms. SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 19:34, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• We don't generally list homeworld in the infobox based on a character simply living on a world, it's for places confirmed to be the character's place of birth. Based on the bio I'm assuming that isn't confirmed for Larrim? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:10, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
• With four paragraphs the bio is long enough to split into two sections, so you can add a second quote if there is one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:10, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
• There's also room for a second image in the bio, perhaps an image of Revan, Kadir or the shield. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:10, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
• Does the game actually describe Huttesse as his native language or is just what he uses to speak to Revan? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:10, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
• You could include the Sith armor or Carth Onasi quote in the BTS. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:10, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Addressed. SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 14:07, 10 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:28, 16 January 2024 (UTC)