Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Laotah

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Laotah

  • Nominated by: Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 14:52, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: To YouTube for quotes! Or Menk shall be unhappy!

(3 ACs/5 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. 501st dogma(talk) 00:07, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
    • Guess I'm not a good editor if I didn't even notice the BtS was missing.... 501st dogma(talk) 00:12, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Looks good. Note my edit to his personality and traits, I really don't see why his species and gender should be counted as either. Hanzo Hasashi 04:06, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Winterz 02:02, May 23, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 02:17, May 23, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 03:24, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Plagueis327 01:43, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 11:31, June 8, 2012 (UTC)
  8. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 23:42, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Object

501st
  • Context for Tython in intro.
    • Done.
  • Note: Throughout the article you link to blue and grey. Get rid of those and instead link to color, as the others are disambig.
    • Actually, blue is an article. But I changed blue-grey to a link to color.
      • It's actualy large disambig article. 501st dogma(talk) 00:07, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
        • It was always my understanding that it was one's personal choice to link to color at the first opportunity, or to link all individual colors, but it just had to be consistent throughout the article. Hanzo Hasashi 04:05, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
  • Last paragraph in bio. What saber?
    • Um.... Laotah's. The sentence has been reworked.
  • Is a link to his actual lightsaber to much to ask for?
    • Not really enough info to make an article. It gets stolen and destroyed. The end. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 23:51, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
  • Good work. 501st dogma(talk) 20:16, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • I think you should mention the Hero of Tython in the introduction. Good work on the article.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 14:33, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
Winterz
  • Is it any possible to make a 'Powers and Abilities' section (noting that he's force-sensitive)? Winterz 00:32, May 23, 2012 (UTC)
    • He shows absolutely no Force-powers whatsoever. Just talks, stumbles around, and dies. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 01:59, May 23, 2012 (UTC)
      • Then it falls to the Corps now... Winterz 02:04, May 23, 2012 (UTC)
Cav
  • Context on who/what Flesh Raiders are.
    • Done.
  • Previously mentioned above, a Powers and Abilities section could be added since Laotah wielded a lightsaber. If not, then a mention should be made in the PT section. - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:13, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:42, June 10, 2012 (UTC)