- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Lanna
- Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 03:05, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: FACPOV:ROTJ had so many wonderful queer stories
- Date Archived: 01:08, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 941 words (124 introduction, 757 body, 60 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 971 words (124 introduction, 816 body, 31 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS, WP:PRIDE, WP:WOMEN
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
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Support
—spookywillowwtalk 03:59, 31 March 2024 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 05:14, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
- I really need to get around to properly reading this book Zed42 (talk) 23:38, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
- Booply (talk) 23:53, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Master Fredcerique
(talk) (he/him) 01:08, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
Object
spookly
It tends to be precedent for when a piece of IU info is sourced to OOU that we also state like 'On Twitter... so and so revealed [x].' Or whatnot similar.—spookywillowwtalk 01:56, 30 March 2024 (UTC)- Added. Different tweet than the other ref cause I was using that one to avoid a double ref, as it confirms both Lanna and Karie's genders. Panther436 (talk) 04:12, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- Just curious, are you opposed to making the ref now used in the BtS the gender ref for the infobox and for the PT ref? I see that the other one is needed for the biography's mention of 'women' while referring to both; but optimally the PT and infobox would match the BtS since the BtS now states that's where it was revealed.—spookywillowwtalk 04:19, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- I liked it consistent throughout the body but that's perfectly fine, swapped around. Panther436 (talk) 04:39, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- Just curious, are you opposed to making the ref now used in the BtS the gender ref for the infobox and for the PT ref? I see that the other one is needed for the biography's mention of 'women' while referring to both; but optimally the PT and infobox would match the BtS since the BtS now states that's where it was revealed.—spookywillowwtalk 04:19, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- Added. Different tweet than the other ref cause I was using that one to avoid a double ref, as it confirms both Lanna and Karie's genders. Panther436 (talk) 04:12, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
I realize this is an incredibly vague objection, but I think a lot of the "Unshared feelings" section is pretty play-by-play in that it includes a lot of direct recounting of dialogue. Of course, a lot of that can be kept, but I'd like to see a pass made through to focus more on actions and summarizing rather than prosifying each line. A similar objection where I've explained more about what play-by-play generally means when I'm phrasing it like this can be found here, though happy to elaborate further if needed.- Always figured I'd get this objection again someday if I wasn't careful. Hopefully it's better now :) Panther436 (talk) 07:10, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- Yep, thanks.—spookywillowwtalk 03:59, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
- Always figured I'd get this objection again someday if I wasn't careful. Hopefully it's better now :) Panther436 (talk) 07:10, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- (Review note) I'm assuming the above tinkering will tow it back under, but this is currently reading with the bot as 1001 words.—spookywillowwtalk 05:20, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
Zed
Galactic Empire should be mentioned (and linked) wherever you think fits in the body, since right now its only context is the Imperial attacks on the Home One.Zed42 (talk) 22:42, 7 April 2024 (UTC)- Added Panther436 (talk) 22:56, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:08, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Stowing these here for reference's logging sake 1 , 2.—spookywillowwtalk 01:56, 30 March 2024 (UTC)