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Krix
- Nominated by: Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 20:20, February 5, 2017 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:Thanks to the bot I can throw up another Trando.
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Support
- Cevan
(talk) 21:22, February 6, 2017 (UTC) - Cwedin(talk) 21:27, February 10, 2017 (UTC)
I hope you'll write up the Legends version, as well. Imperators II(Talk) 11:23, June 13, 2017 (UTC)- We need more Canon status articles. I've even had people point this out on the Instagram account. MasterFred
(Whatever) 01:06, July 9, 2017 (UTC)
Object
Cevan
Any chance you could add in to the biography that Krix was present for Garnac's endorsement of the hunt, as well as the fact that he and the others Trandoshans then grabbed their weapons before heading out that day?Cevan
(talk) 22:13, February 5, 2017 (UTC)
- How does that look? --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 20:23, February 6, 2017 (UTC)
Imperators II
Intro
"Krix was a Trandoshan male hunter and pilot who was a member of a hunting guild that hunted sentient beings." - could you please do something about this repetition?"Krix witnessed Dar's initiation ceremony, but the young hunter was killed the following day." - you should add that Dar was killed by one of the captives."Krix flew a hover pod to the site of the guild's crashed freighter" - here, as well, the intro should be clarified a bit by saying the captives caused the crash.- (not an objection) You should double-check whether the links you add are of the correct continuity, I found and fixed two for you.
"After a skirmish dissolved Garnac's guild" - here, again, I believe you should add that the skirmish was with the captives.- Got these ones (Well, mostly. Will check the linking further as I get to the body). --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 06:31, June 1, 2017 (UTC)
- Pretty sure all the links are fixed now. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 03:17, June 3, 2017 (UTC)
- Got these ones (Well, mostly. Will check the linking further as I get to the body). --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 06:31, June 1, 2017 (UTC)
Body
You can't source any of these names to the episodes: Wasskah, HCT-2001 Dragonboat-class Reugeot 905 freighter, MSP80 Pteropter hover pod, and I'm guessing the species and/or names of the captives, as well. Check for others, too.- I thought we duck-tested starships/vehicle (With some exceptions, like the various Star Destroyer variations) and aliens (although probably notwithstanding given that the character names need to be sourced anyways, yes). --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 08:59, June 1, 2017 (UTC)
- I think you're confusing two things here: yes, unless specified otherwise, the name of a ship model is the same in Legends and in Canon, but its name in Canon still has to be referenced to something, be it this tweet by Leland Chee or whatever. Just like you actually did with Wasskah in the article. And the same applies to species. Imperators II(Talk) 05:38, June 3, 2017 (UTC)
- Alright. Most of it could be referenced to the original episode guide (Wayback Machine to 2011), the Hover pod name being the only thing that could be sourced to the current one (Under concept art). --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 20:12, June 12, 2017 (UTC)
- I think you're confusing two things here: yes, unless specified otherwise, the name of a ship model is the same in Legends and in Canon, but its name in Canon still has to be referenced to something, be it this tweet by Leland Chee or whatever. Just like you actually did with Wasskah in the article. And the same applies to species. Imperators II(Talk) 05:38, June 3, 2017 (UTC)
- I thought we duck-tested starships/vehicle (With some exceptions, like the various Star Destroyer variations) and aliens (although probably notwithstanding given that the character names need to be sourced anyways, yes). --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 08:59, June 1, 2017 (UTC)
"helped pull the body of the pilot" - helped whom?- Added. It was Ratter. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 03:13, June 3, 2017 (UTC)
Skirmish on Wasskah is linked to in the intro; it should be linked to in the body, as well.- Done --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 03:13, June 3, 2017 (UTC)
Please create Category:Garnac's hunting guild members as a subcategory of Category:Hunters and add Krix and all the other applicable members to it.Imperators II(Talk) 09:17, May 25, 2017 (UTC)- Category created. Added it to all applicable pages. Will get to the rest shortly after the Mem-Day weekend. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 20:32, May 27, 2017 (UTC)
Toprawa
- Is there anything in the episode that would warrant adding an Equipment section? Like any weaponry or technology he uses (not counting his hover pod), or any significant stuff he's wearing, like armor? I ask this upfront because you're at 938 words, and any addition will likely bring you to FAN. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:22, August 10, 2017 (UTC)
- Aside from the hover pod and the clothes on his back (And I suppose the freighter which he pilots for one scene), he is very briefly seen holding a blaster rifle he grabbed off of a pile of blasters when the Trandos get ready for their first hunt in "Padawan Lost." About 12:30 into the episode. He's never seen using it, though, nor is he seen holding it again. I make a vague mention to this on the first sentence of the second section. (edit) In fact, if you watch the following scene closely, Krix apparently ditches the rifle while loading onto a hover pod as he isn't seen with it while running around the platform.--Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 21:31, August 10, 2017 (UTC)
- I'll be honest, if it was me, I would probably try to mention the following things. It looks like from his concept art (and his final design too?) that he has a utility belt and I guess I would call them utility suspenders(?) with ammo pouches. I can also see a holster on his hip. It also looks like they all wear hunting jackets or hunting vests with unique designs on them, which I would definitely say speaks to individualism/personality. It looks like Krix has lightning designs on his, for example. On top of that, I would definitely make sure to mention the blaster rifle somewhere in the article. The Equipment section is the place for it if it's not important enough to mention in the Bio. Again, if it were me, I would mention this stuff, particularly things we have articles for and can link to. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:56, August 10, 2017 (UTC)
- Yah, I can write about that if you think it's necessary. All of the Trandos are fairly unique with their clothing and what not. Not quite suspenders, as they seem separate from his belt. There's a term for that, I can look it up. Holster seems to be empty, but it's there. Yah, I'll write up an Equipment section. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 05:49, August 11, 2017 (UTC)
- Aaand done. Takes us to 1107 words. Apparently they're just straight up called "tactical suspenders" (according to web store listings). So I guess I'll just call them that. I suppose magic will have to be done to move this to FAN then. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 06:07, August 11, 2017 (UTC)
- Yah, I can write about that if you think it's necessary. All of the Trandos are fairly unique with their clothing and what not. Not quite suspenders, as they seem separate from his belt. There's a term for that, I can look it up. Holster seems to be empty, but it's there. Yah, I'll write up an Equipment section. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 05:49, August 11, 2017 (UTC)
- I'll be honest, if it was me, I would probably try to mention the following things. It looks like from his concept art (and his final design too?) that he has a utility belt and I guess I would call them utility suspenders(?) with ammo pouches. I can also see a holster on his hip. It also looks like they all wear hunting jackets or hunting vests with unique designs on them, which I would definitely say speaks to individualism/personality. It looks like Krix has lightning designs on his, for example. On top of that, I would definitely make sure to mention the blaster rifle somewhere in the article. The Equipment section is the place for it if it's not important enough to mention in the Bio. Again, if it were me, I would mention this stuff, particularly things we have articles for and can link to. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:56, August 10, 2017 (UTC)
- Aside from the hover pod and the clothes on his back (And I suppose the freighter which he pilots for one scene), he is very briefly seen holding a blaster rifle he grabbed off of a pile of blasters when the Trandos get ready for their first hunt in "Padawan Lost." About 12:30 into the episode. He's never seen using it, though, nor is he seen holding it again. I make a vague mention to this on the first sentence of the second section. (edit) In fact, if you watch the following scene closely, Krix apparently ditches the rifle while loading onto a hover pod as he isn't seen with it while running around the platform.--Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 21:31, August 10, 2017 (UTC)
Comments
Some new edits will have to be made. Depending on the lighting of the scene, Krix, Gilas, and Clutch become very difficult to tell apart. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 21:03, March 20, 2017 (UTC)
- Is still GA length. Re-evaluate if you have too. I apologize for this. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 21:37, March 20, 2017 (UTC)