Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Krayiss Two

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Krayiss Two

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 05:41, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: What does Floyd do when not doing Lost Tribe articles? TOTJ shit. I CANNOT BE STOPPED

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Winterz (talk) 23:28, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
2. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 00:49, January 9, 2013 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:59, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 19:30, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
5. Clean, as usual. :P MasterFred^(Whatever) 20:00, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. Winterz
   • Coordinates should be in the body.
     • Just FYI, we're still waiting on a response from Jason Fry and/or Dan Wallace to clarify the in-universe canonicity of the Atlas grid coordinates. Until then, it would probably be best to leave them out of the body of the article. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:44, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
   • How was she killed and then tortured? If it was her spirit, then you must be that specific.
     • The text is very vague about exactly what they do to her. Added that her spirit was in torment. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 23:17, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
   • Winterz (talk) 16:58, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
   • I forgot to ask a thing, is there any info you can give from the Atlas maps, considering its grid location? Winterz (talk) 15:54, December 27, 2012 (UTC)
     • Nothing much that I can discern. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 03:48, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
2. Imperators II
   • Information concerning the Esstran sector can't be sourced to the Atlas, because it is only first mentioned in the Atlas Online Companion.

Imperators II^(Talk) 13:12, January 14, 2013 (UTC)

1. • • Huh, good catch. Fixed.
   • The bulleted lists in the infobox: are the bullets of the first items of the lists (Outer Rim Territories, Esstran sector, library-temple) really necessary? Imperators II^(Talk) 13:15, January 14, 2013 (UTC)
   • Yeah, that's standard operating procedure. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 23:46, January 14, 2013 (UTC)

Cav

• Grid coordinates question, despite the above comment. I know we're waiting on some official response and subsequent stance, but until then I think we should be consistent and include them in the body.
  • Done.
• Are there no decent images of Sith Space we can use to illustrate the article at all? - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:31, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
  • Popped one in there. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:17, January 9, 2013 (UTC)

Toprawa

• It would be more appropriate to show a more zoomed-in shot of "Krayiss" on the map that's currently being used in the infobox. See Galtea and Ione as two examples. It may require you to ask someone with advanced imaging abilities to do this for you, unless you can upload a larger version of that file. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:07, January 24, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:01, January 30, 2013 (UTC)