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Kowakian rum
- Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 01:31, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A former CA of mine that with an update, slid to GA length.
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Support
- JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:55, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
- Dentface (talk) 21:20, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:02, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 09:15, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
OOM 224 17:16, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
Object
Dent
The link to hull stripper in the article should be italicized to match the quote it's mentioned in.Dentface (talk) 22:16, 21 August 2021 (UTC)- Fixed.—spookywillowwtalk 02:53, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
The History section talks about 4 ABY whereas ref 7 talks about 3 ABY. Which one is correct?1358 (Talk) 20:37, 1 September 2021 (UTC)- 3 ABY is correct, swapped.—spookywillowwtalk 16:26, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
The characterization of the hangover as being "romanced by an irascible rancor" by Velus sounds like something that could be added to the description in addition to just describing it as "extremely unpleasant". Not with those specific words, specifically, but something.1358 (Talk) 12:26, 3 September 2021 (UTC)- Added.—spookywillowwtalk 23:06, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
- It would probably be a good idea to clarify that it was Velus who compared it to a rancor meeting. 1358 (Talk) 17:28, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
- Added.—spookywillowwtalk 03:19, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
- It would probably be a good idea to clarify that it was Velus who compared it to a rancor meeting. 1358 (Talk) 17:28, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
- Added.—spookywillowwtalk 23:06, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Tooth and Claw takes place concurrently with Empire Strikes Back; specifically after the Falcon evades the Empire and Vader puts out a bounty on it. Therefore, the date note can be reduced.Body can use an image, maybe Cradossk or Velus?UberSoldat93(talk) 09:24, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- Both should be added/altered.—spookywillowwtalk 03:19, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
OOM
Infobox: I don't see a need to mention "alcoholic beverage" in the physical description field, especially when rum is already provided in the type fieldOOM 224 18:26, 12 September 2021 (UTC)- Removed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:37, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:16, 13 September 2021 (UTC)