Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kosmos

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Kosmos

  • Nominated by: TK-462 (talk) 20:55, April 9, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

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Support

  1. Nice work --Lewisr (talk) 01:01, April 29, 2020 (UTC)
  2. --Editoronthewiki (talk) 12:49, April 29, 2020 (UTC)
  3. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 12:57, April 29, 2020 (UTC)
  4. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 13:35, April 29, 2020 (UTC)
  5. JMAS Jolly Trooper Hey, it's me! 13:57, April 29, 2020 (UTC)
  6. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:42, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Zed
  • "Human" is exclusive to the infobox, and thus needs to be mentioned in the body.
  • The infobox and date reference use "between 21 BBY and 20 BBY" while the article body uses "in 21 BBY." The date in the body additionally needs to be referenced.
    • If I may chime in, Star Wars: Galactic Atlas already dates the Zillo Beast arc to 21 BBY, so the date in the infobox will need to be reworked. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:15, April 10, 2020 (UTC)
      • Great, thanks. I'm gonna need to pick that one up. --TK-462 (talk) 16:45, April 10, 2020 (UTC)
  • If Kosmos' helmet is never removed, I don't think you can confidently state his hair color in the Personality and traits section. He would naturally be identical to Jango Fett, but there are plenty of instances of clone troopers with different hair colors.
    • Since clones are, well, clones, of Jango Fett, they'd have the same basic characteristics. However, I hadn't noted that he would have had naturally black hair, as like you said he could have dyed it. Thanks for the catch. --TK-462 (talk) 18:28, April 10, 2020 (UTC)
  • The Zillo Beast and Coruscant need context in the intro upon their first mentions.
  • You should mention the Galactic Republic itself somewhere in the body, as well as the Clone Wars.
    • Adding onto this, it should ideally be mentioned in full rather than just "Republic". Zed42 (talk) 21:37, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
      • Good point, thank you. --TK-462 (talk) 23:49, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
  • The biography should mention that he was created as a clone rather than just being born on Kamino.
    • I think you should also specify there that he was a clone of Jango Fett. Zed42 (talk) 21:37, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
      • Done. --TK-462 (talk) 23:49, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
        • Could you also add this to the mention of his creation on Kamino in the Biography? Zed42 (talk) 21:52, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
          • It already is, first line. --TK-462 (talk) 16:00, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
            • I meant the mention of Jango Fett, but I've gone ahead and amended it. Zed42 (talk) 23:58, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • I might be misremembering, but aren't Kosmos and the other troopers stationed to guard the laboratory before the Zillo Beast escapes, and are killed when it does? The order of events here make it seem otherwise.
    • Good point, you're correct and I got the events fixed. --TK-462 (talk) 18:28, April 10, 2020 (UTC)
  • The episode release date cannot be referenced to the newer episode guides, as they unfortunately do not contain it anywhere.
    • This hasn't been fixed, it's still sourced to the new guide. The older guide linked here does include the release date, however. Zed42 (talk) 21:37, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
      • I believe this should be the correct one? I used the link you provided, but it was the same as I had before. --TK-462 (talk) 23:49, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
        • The date should be referenced to the first guide in the External links section that I linked above, which uses the {{SWArchive}} template. Zed42 (talk) 21:52, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
          • I think that should do it. Sorry about that, I'm still learning the ins and outs of the OOU dates. --TK-462 (talk) 16:03, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • Kosmos' appearance in the episode (as mentioned in the BTS) needs to be referenced to the episode itself. Zed42 (talk) 04:58, April 10, 2020 (UTC)
    • His appearance is still referenced to the episode guide, which has no mention of him. Zed42 (talk) 21:37, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
  • "…the Zillo Beast, which had been transported to Coruscant after the catastrophic Battle of Malastare, where the beast had been discovered by the Republic's use of a prototype electro-proton bomb." Can the second half of the sentence be referenced to "The Zillo Beast Strikes Back"? If not, it needs to be sourced to the previous episode. Zed42 (talk) 21:37, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
    • Addressed. --TK-462 (talk) 23:49, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
  • The databank page for clone troopers cannot be directly used to reference Kosmos' physical traits, as it does not directly mention him. It will need to be expanded with a manual reference note, such as the one on this page. Zed42 (talk) 01:03, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Sorry it took so long for me to get back to you. TK-462 (talk) 16:02, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Coruscant needs context.
  • There is no information on Kosmos in the Episode Guide, so the Sources section will need to be removed.
  • You should elaborate on how Kosmos was killed. The entire group was literally crushed by the gate, so I really don't think you should be leaving those details out. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:39, April 10, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed. --TK-462 (talk) 19:49, April 10, 2020 (UTC)
  • You're still using the new guide to source the air date, you need to switch it to the old one. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:57, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed. --TK-462 (talk) 01:37, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
  • There seems to be space for one image. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:07, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
    • There's nothing worth adding of Kosmos himself, but I'll see if I can find on of the laboratory being destroyed, or something applicable like that. TK-462 (talk) 17:05, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
      • You can add one of the entire unit being crushed by the wall. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 17:08, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
        • There's not one currently on Wookieepedia, but I left a message for JMAS. TK-462 (talk) 17:21, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
          • It is the responsibility of the nominator to fix the objections. If JMAS is unwilling/unable to supply you with a second image, you need to find someone else to do it. Right now, this objection has been unfixed for 8 days and is eligible for removal in two days unless fixed. 1358 (Talk) 08:34, April 28, 2020 (UTC)
            • Fixed as best I could. Thanks for the heads up. TK-462 (talk) 00:31, April 29, 2020 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • Before I get into this, there is something weird going on with the first Biography paragraph. It literally ends in "The [5]". 1358 (Talk) 20:30, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
    • Thanks for catching that! It looks like it was just left over from a previous copy-edit or something. TK-462 (talk) 02:18, May 15, 2020 (UTC)
Vitus
  • The Clone Wars in the first paragraph needs context.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 04:01, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

  • In 21 BBY, when the Zillo Beast was brought to the Galactic Republic's capital, Coruscant, after the Battle of Malastare, where Kosmos was stationed. The way this reads, there should be more to the sentence. Rather than make it an objection, I just did some minor rewording of the intro, and give the nom my support. - JMAS Jolly Trooper Hey, it's me! 13:57, April 29, 2020 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

  1. ACvote Unadressed objection from ecks over 10 days old. Tommy-Macaroni 21:02, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:04, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ACvote MasterCommerce GuildFredcerique 21:06, May 25, 2020 (UTC)