Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kosh/Legends

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Kosh

Very nice.—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 01:32, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
Good job. Hanzo Hasashi 03:59, April 6, 2011 (UTC)
I'm not QJG-biased. Not at all. Whoever would suggest such a thing?? :P—Tommy 9281 Sunday, April 10, 2011, 14:16 UTC
Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:09, April 18, 2011 (UTC)
Assuming JMAS is satisfied with his objection. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 20:52, April 18, 2011 (UTC)
I am. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 22:17, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Any personality and traits? Whether or not there is, apparently, from my past CA noms, it is important to include weapons and relevant physical appearances when applicable. I will do the physical appearance for you this time. Otherwise, good job. Hanzo Hasashi 16:45, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
- I don't see anything relevant for a P&T. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 16:38, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
  - I thought most likely not, but was just checking. In regard to his physical appearance and uniform etc, I have seen quality articles with and without those in the P & T section, so not 100% sure if it was needed or not. From some of my past CA noms, those were others' objections though. Hanzo Hasashi 03:59, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Two things. Firstly, I'm somewhat confused by the inclusion of the SW.com Visual Guide article into the Sources list. I didn't read through it, but a quick text search shows that the Kosh character is not mentioned within at all. If the character is indirectly mentioned in there somewhere, the item needs an Imo tag.
- Kosh is mentioned in one of the captions to the image depicting the Desert Sands' search for the droids. That's why the text search couldn't find it. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 13:59, April 18, 2011 (UTC)
  - Fair enough. I can't get any of those to load, so I'll take your word for it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:09, April 18, 2011 (UTC)
Secondly, I really hate to make image objections, but I feel like it would probably be more appropriate to try and show an actual image of C-3PO and R2-D2 together on Tatooine, in the context of this article. I'm thinking possibly a shot of them right after they emerge from the escape pod and are arguing about which direction to take in the Dune Sea. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:10, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
- At QGJ's request, I've uploaded an inserted an image of Artoo and Threepio shortly before parting ways on Tatooine. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 04:09, April 18, 2011 (UTC)
  - Awesome, thanks. Looks perfect. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:09, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

I was originally going to just make a minor factual correct, and then not have to object, but then I realized it would require a bit of a rewrite. Therefore, I feel it should be left up to the nominator to do. You state Vader soon discerned that before being captured, Organa had hidden the plans inside her astromech droid, R2-D2, who, along with his counterpart, C-3PO, used an escape pod to reach Tatooine's surface. This is incorrect. Vader discerned that she had hidden the plans in what he believed was an empty escape pod. It wasn't until they found the pod, that they discovered the piece of the droid, after which they re-focused the search on the droids. Correcting that will then require a bit of a rewrite of the rest of the biography section as well. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 04:09, April 18, 2011 (UTC)
- Should be fixed now. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 13:59, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:24, April 18, 2011 (UTC)