Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kory

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Kory

  • Nominated by: Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 09:43, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My answer to Cade's Project Hero. I give you part one of Trayus's Project: [Redacted by administration]

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Plagueis327 (talk) 16:06, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
  2. The Korriban Sith Inquisitor quests always leave me wanting to utterly destroy Harkun. (My Inq is a lady as well.)--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 04:12, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:11, July 26, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Now, we need to get six other people to start Project Cipher, Project Hunter, Project Barsen'thor, Project Meteor, Project Ace, and Project Wrath. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 23:05, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 08:01, August 11, 2012 (UTC)
  6. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 11:26, August 12, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Cav
  • Before reviewing properly, can you please check this anon edit for accuracy. - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:32, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
  • After the initiates were given their first task, Harkun singled out a late-arriving acolyte for harassment. - I take it this is the PC, correct? I think it might need to be made more specific though, as there are three other acolytes it could be.
  • Do we know what tests Kory would have undergone in the Tomb? - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 20:16, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
    • The PC is asked to battle and kill Spindrall's acolytes, but the specific tasks given to the other acolyte's in Harkun's class are unknown. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 00:04, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
Fear the wretched Inq
  • Personally, I'd mention the mission she appears in by name in the BtS.
  • I've actually started sourcing the release date of TOR to the reference we have on the actual TOR page, as well as sourcing the BtS materials to the missions. Just a suggestion though.
  • I'm assuming you're going to make the Force-sensitive mandate article eventually, since you seem to specialize in law articles? Looks great otherwise. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 17:20, August 5, 2012 (UTC)
    • Done, good idea, and yessiree. I'll write it and try to GA it eventually :P Thanks for the review. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 22:58, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • "Kory completed the task and survived Spindrall's tests": this part in the intro is a bit inconsistent with the body, where it simply says that Spindrall "judged" her without any mention of tests, per say. Could you clarify this? If simply finding Spindrall was the test, that should be mentioned explicitly. CC7567 (talk) 00:19, August 11, 2012 (UTC)
    • It's implied that all of the acolytes are tested in some way upon meeting Spindrall. I've added into the bio that he "challenged her." Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 03:02, August 11, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:26, August 12, 2012 (UTC)


  • "Wretched bitch"? Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 16:27, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
    • Alternatively, Project Asshole. That sums up the Inq pretty well. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 18:16, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
      • The Inq? Ohh, the Inquisitor! I thought you meant the Inq! Heh. You playing a female Inquisitor? Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 18:27, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
        • HAHAHAHA. Yeah the Sith Inquisitor. She's a "lady." I feel like that'll be the canon outcome if and when they do come up with canon identities for the characters. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 22:59, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
          • "Lady Kallig".... hmm. The Consular needs to be a female, and the Knight and trooper needs to be guys. Warrior is of course going to be a male Pureblood. Not being sexist, but the Knight really should be male... my project will go so much better if he is a he. :P Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 00:28, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
            • I agree with all of those. Agent's a toss-up for me though. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 02:31, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
              • The Agent needs to be a male Chiss. He just needs to be a Chiss. We need some love for the blue-skins. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 19:55, July 12, 2012 (UTC)