Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kolatill system/Legends

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Kolatill system

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:36, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: More systems! More I say!

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Support

1. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 00:02, September 21, 2010 (UTC)
2. 1358 ^(Talk) 13:56, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
3. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 13:37, September 25, 2010 (UTC)
4. Grunny (talk) 00:47, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
5. Cylka^-talk- 14:42, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Jujiggum

• Just one: "it launched TIE/sa bombers against Kolatill, which in turn bombed Kolatill's capital city…" Technically, this grammatically says that Kolatill bombed its own capital city; please reword. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:36, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
  • Reworded, hopefully should read better. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:35, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

• I just need some clarification regarding the "second planet" thing. Does the source specifically state this second planet is in the Kolatill system? Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 14:46, September 18, 2010 (UTC)
  • Well, the adventure is contained entirely in the Kolatill system, with the FarStar never leaving orbit. Standard starfighter patrols are sent out to watch for Imperial activity in the system, which leads the encounter. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 21:48, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:42, September 28, 2010 (UTC)