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Kolatill Council

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 19:37, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: /Whistles nonchalantly/

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Clean, as always. -- 1358 ^(Talk) 20:29, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
2. $Michiel$ 13:37, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
3. Lucky for you that I can tolerate DarkStryder. :p Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:35, August 12, 2010 (UTC)
4. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:45, August 21, 2010 (UTC)
5. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:14, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Michiel

• Just two minor points:
  • In the Organization you use "others," I think this is supposed to be "only."
    • Correct, changed.
  • In Bts Omen is mislinked.
    • Good catch.
• And a question:
  • The council was reformed with just the tree survivors or with new people as well?
    • The source doesn't state, just that there are three surviving members of the Council by the time of the adventure.
      • I skimmed through the box a bit, but couldn't really find anything either. No further objections from me, well done. $Michiel$ 13:37, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
• Good work otherwise. $Michiel$ 11:54, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:58, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Moffship

• You mention in the infobox that the Council was formed prior to 2 BBY, but this information is exclusive to that field. Is there anything notable about the year with regards to the Council that could be added to the article? Additionally, this would require that "Rise of the Empire era" be added to the era field in the infobox.
  • Should have been 0 ABY; the 2 BBY date was a mix up that stemmed from the date Sarne took over the sector.
• Another infobox- and year-related question: The infobox says the Council was dissolved in 0 BBY, but the intro and body say 0 ABY.
  • Changed to ABY in all cases; source states it was 8 years prior to 8 ABY.
• Good work. I'm still not a huge fan of DarkStryder, though. :p Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:11, August 12, 2010 (UTC)
  • Not a fan. Bloody cheek :P - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 20:32, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Jujiggum

• Just one little nitpicky thing: in the intro you say the Council thanked the New Republic as a whole, while in the History you say they just thanked the Far Star's crew. Which is correct? Otherwise, quite nice. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 03:17, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
  • Clarified that they thanked the FarStar crew in the intro. Thanks for the review. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:51, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:14, August 23, 2010 (UTC)