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Kni

  • Nominated by: Jedi Order ImpacticForce (Talk) 17:13, 12 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My first nomination since moving! Woo!
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:KOTOR

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Inqvote I have no idea why Jocasta didn't tell me how old my objections were, apologies. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:25, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
  2. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 04:07, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
  3. —spookywillowwtalk 23:05, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:51, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
  5. ACvote OOM 224 21:58, 24 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • The way you start off the bio right now doesn't quite work. You need to reintroduce the subject (i.e., "Kni was a Duros male..."), since the intro is separate from the body.
  • Why are you linking "Sith Fleet" like that? Do we really not have an article for it?
  • (Review note) No space goes after references' = sign. (<ref name="KOTOR" />, not <ref name= "KOTOR" />) JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:50, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
    • Added a reintroduction and fixed the reference formatting errors. As for the "Sith Fleet", I don't think this article pertains to the fleet of Revan's Empire. Given that the "Sith Fleet" is brought up several times in the games, it could probably use its own article.Jedi Order ImpacticForce (Talk) 13:19, 16 February 2022 (UTC)
      • Correction! I found the article for the Jedi Civil war sith fleet. I linked it. Jedi Order ImpacticForce (Talk) 19:33, 16 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Kni's thoughts don't really seem like P+T material to me. Specifically these two lines: "Kni thought that the Galactic Republic was losing the war but to no fault of their own. Having seen the decimation of his planet, he believed the Sith Empire was strong enough to destroy all its enemies." JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:53, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
    • As per Discord, integrated into the Biography section.Jedi Order ImpacticForce (Talk) 20:06, 25 February 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Something weird's going on here, along with a typo: "While t the Duros's past as a refugee, Kni recognized Revan as a Jedi, and he thanked him and the Enclave's Council for allowing him to stay." UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:53, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Wow. No idea what happened there. It should be fixed now. Jedi Order ImpacticForce (Talk) 16:09, 21 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:58, 24 March 2022 (UTC)