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Klivian

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 17:31, 9 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: RIP Hobbie
  • Date Archived: 22:02, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 417 words (94 introduction, 293 body, 30 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 330 words (67 introduction, 211 body, 52 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Novels

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Support

  1. ACvote CometSmudge (talk) 22:39, 11 October 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 02:49, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 04:38, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 21:34, 16 November 2024 (UTC)

Object

spookly
  • Specifically for story types of simult appearances within the same anthology, it would be more ideal to lead off the BTS with "... appeared simultaneously in [source] and [source], two short stories that were written by [authors, respectively] and published in [anthology]. As, while they are ordered in-book, that's more for chronology and they did all release the same day; this is also how we treat episodes and other content that releases same day. And since they are the same source, they needn't the full publish date since with rewording it'd only be stating that they're in the same 2023 anthology to have the year (and also I think the full date isn't sourceable to the story itself anyway).—spookywillowwtalk 18:17, 9 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Understood, fixed. Wok142 (talk) 20:41, 9 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Did some minor tweaking to prevent the top image from section cutting into the History. But, that does bring to mind that in default view, History does look like it'd look more aesthetic with a split and another image of one of those people (Norra maybe?)—spookywillowwtalk 18:54, 31 October 2024 (UTC)]
    • Yea good call, I've split that. Image added as well, opted for Wedge instead of Norra though. Wok142 (talk) 23:37, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
Comet
  • Potato seems like it should be added to the plant-based ingredients infobox field
    • Added. Side note is that I've learned that tubers is not always specifically synonymous to potatoes so I've just used the language from the story Wok142 (talk) 21:09, 11 October 2024 (UTC)
  • The Kel Dor seems notable enough to have a page. Citrus might also need a page.
    • Turns out the Kel Dor already had a page so linked that. For the second part, I'm unsure if citrus really needs a page. What would the page really be able to say besides that the Klivian smelled like it? Since it's not mentioned as a plant or anything like that in this story. Wok142 (talk) 21:09, 11 October 2024 (UTC)
  • I think the history section should have a bit more detail and include some of the discussion about the drink, the Kel Dor's reaction, and that Norra's had it before.
  • Since it's only mentioned in the second story, the BTS should probably be tweaked to reflect that, since it reads as if it fully appears in both. CometSmudge (talk) 19:33, 11 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Handled these two. Wok142 (talk) 21:09, 11 October 2024 (UTC)
Lew
  • The info about Wedge and Wes continuing to brew it (and also naming it after him) seem more relevant to be in the history section since imo is more historical than descriptive Lewisr (talk) 02:18, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
  • The Death Star needs context (such as it being a superweapon or battle station etc) Lewisr (talk) 02:18, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Moved and contextualized. Wok142 (talk) 03:43, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
  • I don't personally see the need to include it being simultaneously mentioned in the other story, we'd only include that if both were mentions or both were appearances Lewisr (talk) 02:18, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
    • You got it. Wok142 (talk) 03:43, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
  • The species it's potable by should be moved to the description Lewisr (talk) 03:56, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
  • I think a tiny bit of info about it being drank in the story could be added in the intro, would also maybe suggest just adding the date of his death in the intro too Lewisr (talk) 03:56, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Moved that as well as the taste part since that also feels descriptive. Threw in some in the intro as well. Wok142 (talk) 05:48, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Last thing (sorry for having left scattered objections on this), but I think the top quote should be prosified in the history, especially Norra's part Lewisr (talk) 21:10, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
    • All good! How's that? Wok142 (talk) 21:39, 17 October 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:34, 16 November 2024 (UTC)