- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Kime Enanrum
- Nominated by: Kreivi Wolter 12:44, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Another victim of the sinister Gungan.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:52, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Kilson 18:32, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
Grand Moff Tranner 
(Comlink) 17:57, April 9, 2011 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:33, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 21:05, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Lee attacks
Kime Enanrum was a famous sculptor who lived during the last decades of the Galactic Republic. Same sentence in the intro and the bio. Please reword a little bit.- Roger roger. Kreivi Wolter 18:29, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Otherwise very nice. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:47, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
Some prelims:
He is categorized as a male, yet no mention in the article.- Removed. Kreivi Wolter 20:42, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
I think there's a category for those of undefined species.- Added. Kreivi Wolter 20:42, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Not an objection, but I'd prefer if the CSWE stuff was wrapped in {{CSWECite}}. 1358 (Talk) 20:13, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
- I dont know anything about the pages and the entries of this character :| Kreivi Wolter 20:42, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Actually, it seems like MJ gave you them here. He even gave you the template code. :D 1358 (Talk) 20:08, March 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Holy Motherload of... ... Bantha poodoo! How did I manage to miss that one? Many thanks for pointing that out. Kreivi Wolter 05:34, March 29, 2011 (UTC)
- Actually, it seems like MJ gave you them here. He even gave you the template code. :D 1358 (Talk) 20:08, March 28, 2011 (UTC)
- I dont know anything about the pages and the entries of this character :| Kreivi Wolter 20:42, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
Attack of the PIE
Not an objection, but perhaps you should create a page for canapés, or at least put a redlink in. It's up to you though.- There aren't enough information on those that I would go to make an article. Thus, the redlink it is. Kreivi Wolter 11:21, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
In the bio, "At the same time, he attempted to catch tumbling canapés he had knocked from a nearby waiter, and as the result, he pulled down the statue which shattered to pieces." Replace one or two of the "he"s with Representative Binks, or something along those lines, to make it read more smoothly.- Roger roger. Kreivi Wolter 11:21, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
I'm not exactly sure about this, but in the Appearances section, shouldn't you write (First appearance) next to the HoloNet entry instead of (First mentioned)? Enanrum was interviewed in the article, so doesn't that count as an actual appearance?- No, actually. Those HoloNet articles only reports things that has happened. Enanrum did not appear in it, he/she was only mentioned. Kreivi Wolter 11:21, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
- Other than those, couldn't find anything wrong. Nice job Wolter, it was a funny article. Kilson 02:17, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
Moffship
Context needed on Coruscant in the intro.- Any better? Kreivi Wolter 21:52, April 8, 2011 (UTC)
I would suggest that you go through the article and make sure that nothing is copied word-for-word from the HoloNet News website, as I noticed that you had taken the phrase "[Binks tucked] the tablecloth upon which rested the statue into his cummerbund" directly from the source.Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 22:54, April 6, 2011 (UTC)
- You're right. Done. Kreivi Wolter 21:52, April 8, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:05, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
Many thanks for Master Jon and Borsk Fey'lya for checking those sources. Kreivi Wolter 12:50, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
Kime Enanrum had a page on The Completely Unofficial Star Wars Encylopedia, so I created an External Links section and added a link. Hope that is OK> Kilson 02:17, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks Kreivi Wolter 16:31, March 31, 2011 (UTC)