Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kidnapping of Doctor Tarnis

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Kidnapping of Doctor Tarnis

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 17:31, April 14, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project Hero

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:01, April 18, 2013 (UTC)
2. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 02:41, April 27, 2013 (UTC)
3. Assuming Cav's satisfied. Winterz (talk) 01:17, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 09:34, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:52, May 23, 2013 (UTC)
6. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:39, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object

501st

• In the infobox, you say that he was extracted, but the body says that he fled himself. Perhaps the infobox should reflect that.
  • No, it says extracted in both.
• The place part in the infobox should say Coruscant as well as the Senate Building.
  • Done.
• You need to link to Skirmish in Docking Bay 84 in the body. Could you also try to mention Raid on the Migrant Merchants' Guild warehouse in the body? 501st dogma^(talk) 00:20, April 16, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nah, there's no need, as mentioning the prev/conc/next fields isn't necessary - the warehouse raid isn't directly related to the kidnapping. Cade Calrayn 01:09, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Floyd

• "Tarnis requested that Black Sun conduct his "kidnapping" so that he could escape the Senate Building without suspicion and continue with his plans to escape Coruscant." He wanted to continue his plans to escape Coruscant? In the intro it said he wanted to continue his plans to acquire the Planet Prison, but there's no such mention here. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:05, April 26, 2013 (UTC)
  • Bah, fixed. Cade Calrayn 01:10, April 26, 2013 (UTC)

Cav

• Little thing: his alias "Eli Tarnis" is not mentioned once in the main section of the article.
• When a young Jedi Knight, the former apprentice of Jedi Master Orgus Din, was sent to retrieve the files from the criminals in the Old Galactic Market region, - would a link to the Raid on the Migrant Merchants' Guild warehouse be appropriate here? - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:28, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
  • Both done. Cade Calrayn 00:01, May 17, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:39, May 28, 2013 (UTC)