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Kes system/Legends

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 20:36, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 01:17, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 287 words (70 introduction, 177 body, 40 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST, WP:Warfare

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:26, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Fan26 (Talk) 00:57, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:24, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:37, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
  5. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 14:09, 7 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

Braha
  • Thoughts on emdashing that large context for the Alsakan conflicts? The fact its got to listing stuff within a clause makes the comma structure more complex such that I had to double read that sentence to get the gist.
  • "During the First Alsakan Conflict" the use of during could also imply that the Perlemian Trade Route was redone excluding Kes later on. If that is not the case, can you reword? Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 16:07, 6 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:16, 8 August 2023 (UTC)