Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kebla Yurt

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Kebla Yurt

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. One vote for Kebla Yogurt. Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:20, February 3, 2010 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 16:08, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Got my vote. OLIOSTER (talk) 06:38, February 10, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Well done. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 01:24, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Grunny (Talk) 08:15, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Farlstendoiro. Must be a typo, but I object:
  2. Grunny:
    • This sentence should be clarified. What do you mean by "turning state's evidence"? I'd be guessing something to with the government, but you haven't given any indcation as to what "state" refers to or means in this case. "Matrik told Revan of his plight, describing how he had grown disillusioned with the Exchange, leaving them and turning state's evidence against the criminal syndicate."
      • Addessed.
    • The second paragraph of the "Meeting Revan" section doesn't mention Yurt once. I know the character doesn't have a big part, but you have to try to keep a focus on the article's subject. So can you rework that paragraph to focus more on Yurt? Grunny (Talk) 02:47, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 08:15, February 11, 2010 (UTC)


  • Man this one was complicated. I could so easily have missed things in this article. Trying to figure out what was canon and how everything fit together was difficult. Who would have thought that doing a seemingly completely unrelated quest (Bendak Starkiller) would lead to changes in her responses? Only just managed to catch that one while reading through the equipment emporium article. I hope there aren't others like this... SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 05:58, January 21, 2010 (UTC)
  • Not an actual objection, but unless someone explicitly calls her "human", shouldn't she be listed as "humanoid"?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:51, January 29, 2010 (UTC)
  • Not an objection, but I would like to know why you decided to assume "that the player finishes the Taris dueling ring quests and begins the permacrete detonator quests before meeting Yurt." Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 21:27, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
    • In KOTOR, Revan canonically meets all plot-essential characters and also those that are essential to the completion of light side quests. Yurt's only involvement in light side quests is with the permacrete detonator. Although it is possible that Revan met with her before buying it, canonically at least, there was no reason for him to do so.
    • The dueling ring quests do not provide alignment points, however we include it in the body under the the 100% completion clause. Again, it is possible to meet Yurt beforehand, but this would be a roundabout and unnecessary way of writing the article, with Revan visiting, then doing quests, then visiting again and getting told most of the stuff all over. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 22:52, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
      • Still, I see nothing that absolutely says that Revan couldn't have visited Yurt before the dueling ring quests. However, I am willing to overlook this if both these explanations are detailed in the BTS section. Consider this my objection. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 15:48, February 10, 2010 (UTC)