Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kastays

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Kastays

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:36, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project: DarkStryder

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. The Plaque looks like a pie. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 22:44, 6 June 2009 (UTC)
2. Fair enough. Good work. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Jujiggum) 22:50, 6 June 2009 (UTC)
3. Grunny ^(Talk) 08:33, 7 June 2009 (UTC)
4. Nice job. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 22:41, 7 June 2009 (UTC)
5. Good to go. CC7567 ^(talk) 00:15, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Soresu
   • Perhaps the cause of the fall of the Aaris could be made more clear. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 08:47, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
     • Clarified, hopefully. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:56, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
2. The Grand Master
   • In the quotes, I believe that by "translation notes", you mean that the quotes were from Kastays's notes, which were translated by the Imperial scientist. This, however, is rather unclear, and should be changed: maybe to something like "From Kastays's notes, translated by..."
     • Changed.
   • "The city" becomes rather repetitive in the intro. I'd replace at least one.
     • Changed one.
   • "A scholar of some importance..." Well, was he important or wasn't he? What made him so? This is kind of vague.
     • It's never mentioned. He was a scholar, he was important enough to have a tower in the main governmental complex, but beyond this, nothing else is known. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 21:41, 6 June 2009 (UTC)
   • Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Jujiggum) 18:01, 5 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:01, 12 June 2009 (UTC)