Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kaminoan Armorsmiths Ltd.

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Kaminoan Armorsmiths Ltd.

Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 03:16, 12 February 2025 (UTC)
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Date Archived: 04:11, 20 March 2025 (UTC)
Final word count: 424 words (72 introduction, 281 body, 71 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 424 words (72 introduction, 281 body, 71 behind the scenes)
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~~Kamino being a "location" in the infobox seems to not truly be present in the body, that could do with a quick mention.~~ Wok142 (talk) 07:07, 18 February 2025 (UTC)
- I did mention in the Organization section that their subsidiary is based there, but that's the only explicit mention of the company having any presence on Kamino, which is why I didn't mention it anywhere else CometSmudge (talk) 18:09, 18 February 2025 (UTC)
  - Ah I see... seems fine as is then. Wok142 (talk) 18:20, 18 February 2025 (UTC)

Hmm, I'm kinda not a huge fan of the single-paragraph subsection here: that's generally avoided whenever feasibly possible. In this case, it would look a lot cleaner, IMO, to merge the top two paragraphs of the Products due to them both being about armor, thus allowing for the sectioning to be removed. I do understand that the LG suggests some of these as subheaders, but the overwhelming precedent / history of objections left is to start using those only when there's enough content to fill each and/or to merge the recommended where possible to ensure two paragraphs per section, which this is sort of a mix of.—spookywilloww^talk 02:11, 19 March 2025 (UTC)
- Merged the paragraphs and removed the sectioning CometSmudge (talk) 02:47, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:54, 20 March 2025 (UTC)