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Kalmec
- Nominated by: Jinzler 22:05, March 29, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A Wookiee criminal organization
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 08:12, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
- 501st Dogma
(Comlink) 12:44, April 1, 2012 (UTC)
Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 09:31, April 25, 2012 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:34, May 14, 2012 (UTC)- Cade Calrayn
23:04, May 15, 2012 (UTC)
Menkooroo 01:11, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Lee's charge
Maybe mention that the Wookiees are a species in the intro.- Done --Jinzler 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
A little bit more more context for the Invasion of Naboo.- I didn't want to go into too much detail about the Battle of Naboo, because it does not directly relate to the Kalmec and I only mentioned it as a time reference, to show the era in which the organization operated. To that end, I have now stated in the article that the battle took place in 32 BBY. Would that be sufficient? --Jinzler 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
- Yes. Clone Commander Lee Talk 08:12, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
- I didn't want to go into too much detail about the Battle of Naboo, because it does not directly relate to the Kalmec and I only mentioned it as a time reference, to show the era in which the organization operated. To that end, I have now stated in the article that the battle took place in 32 BBY. Would that be sufficient? --Jinzler 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
Anything known about the outcome between the Kalmec and the agents?- Added --Jinzler 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
- Good work. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:16, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review, I'm always impressed by how you take the time to scrutinize every single new nomination that appears on the GAN page. --Jinzler 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you. Clone Commander Lee Talk 08:12, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review, I'm always impressed by how you take the time to scrutinize every single new nomination that appears on the GAN page. --Jinzler 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
Real quick one
Pretty minor, but Kaaror's section states that he shaved his shoulders. The leading quote and the bio quote both indicate that Furellas shaved her shoulders; could her section mention this, too?Menkooroo 04:33, May 14, 2012 (UTC)- Done, thanks for taking a look at the article. --Jinzler 21:34, May 15, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:15, May 16, 2012 (UTC)