Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kalmec

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Contents

  • 1 Kalmec
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Lee's charge
        • 1.1.2.2 Real quick one
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Kalmec

  • Nominated by: Jinzler 22:05, March 29, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A Wookiee criminal organization

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 08:12, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
  2. 501st DogmaRepublic emblem(Comlink) 12:44, April 1, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:31, April 25, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:34, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 23:04, May 15, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Menkooroo 01:11, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • Maybe mention that the Wookiees are a species in the intro.
    • Done --Jinzler 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
  • A little bit more more context for the Invasion of Naboo.
    • I didn't want to go into too much detail about the Battle of Naboo, because it does not directly relate to the Kalmec and I only mentioned it as a time reference, to show the era in which the organization operated. To that end, I have now stated in the article that the battle took place in 32 BBY. Would that be sufficient? --Jinzler 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
      • Yes. Clone Commander Lee Talk 08:12, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
  • Anything known about the outcome between the Kalmec and the agents?
    • Added --Jinzler 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
  • Good work. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:16, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
    • Thank you for your review, I'm always impressed by how you take the time to scrutinize every single new nomination that appears on the GAN page. --Jinzler 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
      • Thank you. Clone Commander Lee Talk 08:12, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
Real quick one
  • Pretty minor, but Kaaror's section states that he shaved his shoulders. The leading quote and the bio quote both indicate that Furellas shaved her shoulders; could her section mention this, too? Menkooroo 04:33, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
    • Done, thanks for taking a look at the article. --Jinzler 21:34, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:15, May 16, 2012 (UTC)