- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Kahiyuk
- Nominated by: Kilson(Let's have a chat) 01:03, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I'm sure there must have been at least one barn in this city, and who knows, maybe it was burnt a one time.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
Menkooroo 04:26, May 22, 2011 (UTC)
Not sure the city/township issue is that big of a deal, given the many definitions of "township," but meh. Grand Moff Tranner 
(Comlink) 00:23, May 23, 2011 (UTC)- ~Savage
06:36, May 25, 2011 (UTC) - Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:02, May 25, 2011 (UTC)
- MasterFred(Whatever) 17:14, May 25, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Kahi station
It looks like there's a missing parameter in {{City}} --- can you add it, and also hide hideg?"causing the Wookiees to raise an army to beat back the Separatists and notify the Republic to the Separatist presence on Kashyyyk." The wording of this sentence makes it seem like the Wookiees fought and held back the Seps prior to the arrival of the Republic forces, which Tarkov's DB entry doesn't say anything about. Can you reword the sentence?- Good show! This one remains, though, as the mention of beating back the Separatists (with the link to Battle of Kashyyyk (Clone Wars)) comes before the mention of notifying the Republic. It seems to imply that the battle happened before they notified the Republic. Does that make sense? Menkooroo 03:28, May 21, 2011 (UTC)
- I see what you mean, it should be fixed now. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 23:55, May 21, 2011 (UTC)
- Good show! This one remains, though, as the mention of beating back the Separatists (with the link to Battle of Kashyyyk (Clone Wars)) comes before the mention of notifying the Republic. It seems to imply that the battle happened before they notified the Republic. Does that make sense? Menkooroo 03:28, May 21, 2011 (UTC)
Also, if you're going to include the reference to the Wookiee army, I think you'll need to source something other than Tarkov's DB entry, as it doesn't say anything about Wookiee forces fighting in the battle other than Tarkov and Jaccoba. No mention of a Wookiee army. It might not be appropriate to link to Merumeru's volunteer soldiers, either, as they're but one part of the larger Wookiee volunteer force that fought in the battle (they were simply the ground soldiers who fought under Merumeru's leadership).Menkooroo 16:24, May 20, 2011 (UTC)- All objections should be fixed. Again, thanks for the review Menkoorroo. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 02:51, May 21, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa
Please reload the infobox.Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:42, May 23, 2011 (UTC)The intro refers to the Separatist army hiding in a jungle, while in the bio they're hiding in a forest. The two are not exactly synonymous, IU or OOU. Please pick whichever one is most correct.Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:12, May 24, 2011 (UTC)- Went with forest. Thanks for the review Tope. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 04:42, May 25, 2011 (UTC)
PtbSavaged…
I think the BTS is confusing the words town and township; the latter can mean a town or suburb (as a portion of a larger city), but a full city could be a township per the use of township to mean a division of a county. In other words, because we don't know the divisions of Kashyyyk society (or do we?) we don't know which definition is intended and, therefore, whether there is a conflict here at all.- I see what you mean. I deleted that sentence from the Bts and incorporated city and township into the description.
- I think it's OK like this, but if others question it, you could always call it a city in the body, and restore the BTS note and just say we don't know which definition of township is being used. ~Savage 06:36, May 25, 2011 (UTC)
- I think it's OK like this, but if others question it, you could always call it a city in the body, and restore the BTS note and just say we don't know which definition of township is being used. ~Savage
- I see what you mean. I deleted that sentence from the Bts and incorporated city and township into the description.
Perhaps include an image of the father/son team spotting the Seps in the jungle? I realize it's not the city itself, but it would at least be something to illustrate the History section. ~Savage 21:02, May 24, 2011 (UTC)- Image added. Just to let you know, I just realized I forgot add something from the Databank, so I would recommend rereading through that before you support. Thanks for the review Bob. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 04:42, May 25, 2011 (UTC)
- Just a heads up, I moved the image to right-aligned to avoid any section distortion/indentation. Figure this probably looks better. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:02, May 25, 2011 (UTC)
- Image added. Just to let you know, I just realized I forgot add something from the Databank, so I would recommend rereading through that before you support. Thanks for the review Bob. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 04:42, May 25, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:19, May 25, 2011 (UTC)