- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Kabieroun (species)
- Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 06:13, October 2, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: One of the weirdest-looking species to come from the Journal.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
--Eyrezer 09:52, October 2, 2010 (UTC)- Darth Xadún(Consult the Holocron) 21:48, October 7, 2010 (UTC)
Grand Moff Tranner 
(Comlink) 13:36, October 17, 2010 (UTC)
Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 12:13, October 19, 2010 (UTC)- 1358 (Talk) 18:29, October 19, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Xadun
The latter half the Intro sounds like it should be for Detien Kaileel's own article rather than Kabiroun.'The Kabierouns claimed the planet Kabieroun as their homeworld.' Sounds like wasn't and this was a new world, or no-one knew. Specify please.- Thanks for the review. How's it now? ~ SavageBob 20:50, October 6, 2010 (UTC)
- Much better. Darth Xadún(Consult the Holocron) 21:48, October 7, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. How's it now? ~ SavageBob 20:50, October 6, 2010 (UTC)
Xd1358
Only one thing: Mention their sentience in the body as well.1358 (Talk) 12:46, October 19, 2010 (UTC)- Done! Thanks for your review. ~ SavageBob 15:02, October 19, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:29, October 19, 2010 (UTC)
- You may want to add something to the effect that it was Peter Schweighofer that challenged Newcomb to write a story based on this image. See the BTS of Farang for attribution. --Eyrezer 09:49, October 2, 2010 (UTC)
- Ah, didn't know Schweighofer was behind this. Added. Thanks for the quote I stole, too! :) ~ SavageBob 17:04, October 2, 2010 (UTC)
- Is the image of Adion Lang really appropriate for this article? It's not like Lang specifically targeted Kabierouns; he just killed one. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 23:22, October 14, 2010 (UTC)
- Well, I don't see how it's inappropriate. For an article with very few images to choose from, I figured something was better than nothing. Would an image of the Kuari Princess be better? (By the way, I appreciate your copy edit, but there was no consensus on the linking of simple color terms, so I've been trying to link the word color once and then leave the rest by way of compromise. I think it's silly to revert your changes, but I just wanted to mention it.) ~ SavageBob 00:39, October 15, 2010 (UTC)
- There's no need to have three images; two are perfectly fine. Considering Lang has nothing to do with the species as a whole, I find including an image of him is somewhat inappropriate. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 23:18, October 15, 2010 (UTC)
- I'd rather keep it, since I don't see the inappropriateness, but I've swapped it out for something in BTS. What do you think? ~ SavageBob 01:30, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
- Much better. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 13:36, October 17, 2010 (UTC)
- Much better. Grand Moff Tranner
- I'd rather keep it, since I don't see the inappropriateness, but I've swapped it out for something in BTS. What do you think? ~ SavageBob 01:30, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
- There's no need to have three images; two are perfectly fine. Considering Lang has nothing to do with the species as a whole, I find including an image of him is somewhat inappropriate. Grand Moff Tranner
- Well, I don't see how it's inappropriate. For an article with very few images to choose from, I figured something was better than nothing. Would an image of the Kuari Princess be better? (By the way, I appreciate your copy edit, but there was no consensus on the linking of simple color terms, so I've been trying to link the word color once and then leave the rest by way of compromise. I think it's silly to revert your changes, but I just wanted to mention it.) ~ SavageBob 00:39, October 15, 2010 (UTC)