- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
KRONOS-327
- Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 16:36, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Much thanks to CC7567 for putting up with my requests for help.
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
Looking good, Grand Moff. CC7567 (talk) 21:07, 7 July 2009 (UTC)- Great work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 21:34, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
Graestan(Talk) 23:46, 7 July 2009 (UTC)- —Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 19:51, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
- --Darth tom
(Imperial Intelligence) 12:24, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
JOSEF MENGELE Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:01, 11 July 2009 (UTC)
Object
The first sentence of the Characteristics section could probably be worded better; the "therefore" seems rather unnecessary; and the next couple sentences are a little choppy.Great job, Tran. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 17:54, 7 July 2009 (UTC)- Should be better now. Thanks for the review. Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 19:58, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
- Should be better now. Thanks for the review. Grand Moff Tranner
- Toprawa:
I would prefer only that you make a very brief BTS mention that the character was first mentioned in canon in the Visual Guide.Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:37, 11 July 2009 (UTC)- Done. Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 19:38, 11 July 2009 (UTC)
- Done. Grand Moff Tranner
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:42, 14 July 2009 (UTC)
- If you think that the article could use another image, I can screenshot something from the movie; however, it's up to you. CC7567 (talk) 21:07, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
- I think another image would make the article too crowded, but I appreciate the offer. Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 21:09, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
- I think another image would make the article too crowded, but I appreciate the offer. Grand Moff Tranner