- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Jurgan Kalta
- Nominated by: Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 20:12, April 11, 2015 (UTC) - Nomination comments: This nomination is a throwback to some of my first nominations.
(5 ACs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:47, April 11, 2015 (UTC)- IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:42, April 12, 2015 (UTC)
Cade Calrayn 03:55, April 15, 2015 (UTC)- Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:27, April 15, 2015 (UTC)
- -- Darth Culator (Talk) 23:20, April 15, 2015 (UTC)
Object
Toprawa
I'm not sure the Skills and abilities section is really necessary. It's not saying anything that isn't more prominently covered in the Equipment section. You should consider just cutting that.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:11, April 11, 2015 (UTC)- All right, I cut the section.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:17, April 11, 2015 (UTC)
- All right, I cut the section.--Exiled Jedi
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:31, April 15, 2015 (UTC)
Two small notes: 1, you could potentially add a picture of one of Kalta's surviving pieces of equipment to make the article less bare. Some of our less serious readers seem to like dem purty pitchers. This is not an objection, however, as the article is fine without them. 2, kudos on not artificially fluffing 798 words into an FA. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 23:20, April 15, 2015 (UTC)
- Okay, I added an image.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:28, April 15, 2015 (UTC)