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Jubba bird
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:26, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Really thought this might show up in FACPOV, but still got plenty of good info from Nexus of Power
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Support
- LordMominutiae (talk) 17:03, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
- OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 12:28, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 20:01, 25 January 2021 (UTC)- Objections handled via IRC. MasterFred
(talk) 16:16, 31 January 2021 (UTC) 
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:32, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
Object
UberSoldat
Please check if the article requires an update from the Scrap Metal card.UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:42, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
- Updated, thanks for catching the source! Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:01, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
- No problem. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:47, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
- No problem. UberSoldat93
- Updated, thanks for catching the source! Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:01, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
OOM
The species' homeworld is infobox/intro exclusive.- - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 22:53, 27 November 2020 (UTC)- It's in the first line of behaviour? Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:55, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
- It only says they lived on Dagobah, not native to it. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 23:03, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:38, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- It only says they lived on Dagobah, not native to it. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 23:03, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
- It's in the first line of behaviour? Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:55, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
Toprawa
The Biology section seems to be leaving out several vital details, including what I'm guessing is supposed to be a head crest and three claws on each feet. I would give particular emphasis to the fact that the birds seem to have a very strangely humanoid-like face with forward-facing eyes, which is unusual for birds in general. What the article is calling their beak seems to be more like nostrils and a very wide mouth with teeth, which is also strange for birds.I'll amend this after just now looking at the original Legends image, which I can see this is based on and which gives us I think a much clearer indication of what's going on here. That's definitely a break with two nostrils, but it contains a very wide mouth with either protruding teeth or jagged serrations.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:11, 8 February 2021 (UTC)- I'm never sure how detailed to make physical descriptions based on images, but I've expanded the biology and appearance to include more. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:16, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
This is extrapolation since the card image only shows this happening once. For all we know, this could be the only instance this ever happened, so it's not appropriate to present this as if it's a regular thing. You should find a way to reword this: "Dragonsnakes sometimes preyed upon jubba birds, ambushing the birds from beneath the surface as they flew above the swamp."Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:08, 8 February 2021 (UTC)- Reworded. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:16, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
BTS says they were first pictured in Star Wars: The Galactic Explorer's Guide, yet sources says it was Galactic Atlas.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:18, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:51, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:32, 8 February 2021 (UTC)