Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jooli

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Jooli

  • Nominated by: LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 09:43, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: It's been a while since I nominated a GAN.
  • Date Archived: 09:53, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 752 words (130 introduction, 544 body, 78 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Comics

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote "Conversely, you were never meant to stop nominating articles, King LucaRoR." Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 19:06, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
  2. BloodOfIriziSabine Starbird(Syndicure) 19:56, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 17:01, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:14, 21 April 2023 (UTC)
  5. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:49, 22 April 2023 (UTC)

Object

Ziara, archduke of Shu-Torun
  • gender is infobox exclusive + cat for unidentified gender should be removed
    • Remnant of the past, removed. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 15:59, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
  • i think it would be worth establishing that Trios' father was the king when you first mention them both in the body
  • the end result of the Shu-Torun war should be summed up in a short sentence at the end of the bio
    • I didn't consider it relevant to the article itself, but I guess it doesn't hurt. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 15:59, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
  • possible context on trios' "powerful friends"?
    • Per our Discord convo, the source doesn't elaborate. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 15:59, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
  • (review note): copy-edit BloodOfIriziSabine Starbird(Syndicure) 19:06, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Timelines confirms a 0ABY date BloodOfIriziSabine Starbird(Syndicure) 00:27, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
Solha, duke of Serenno
  • The 20minutos article states that Larroca revealed that he inspired Jooli's design in a Facebook post. He also said that the idea wasn't his, but a reader's. The BtS should be updated to establish this. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 08:11, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Implemented, thanks! LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 13:34, 17 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:53, 22 April 2023 (UTC)