Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jonoin

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Jonoin

  • Nominated by: Jinzler 22:03, September 26, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Only just over the word limit

(5 ACs/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Good stuff. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 16:43, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Clean. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:18, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
  3. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 01:52, September 29, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 00:27, September 30, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:51, October 1, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 20:20, October 1, 2010 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 14:16, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Jujiggum
  • "an inter-galactic conflict that was fought between the Republic and the Confederacy of Independent Systems" Wording here is almost identical to the intro; please mix it up a bit (this one or the one in the intro, it doesn't matter which).
    • Reworded --Jinzler 16:37, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
  • Are you sure that energy shielding is what you mean to link to? The page itself looks like its referring to something else.
    • Fixed --Jinzler 16:37, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
  • Do we have enough info for the Confederate base to get an article?
    • Yes we do, I have created one --Jinzler 16:37, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
  • The intro seems a little off-balance in its content. Maybe shorten up a bit of the context on the Clone Wars (doing this could nullify my first objection, too) and add a tiny bit about the battle itself—maybe even just mention that he had to change the plan.
    • See what you think of it now --Jinzler 16:37, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 22:29, September 26, 2010 (UTC)
    • Thanks for your review --Jinzler 16:37, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • After skimming through the Point Blank adventure myself, I'm seeing that there is a healthy portion of the adventure that I believe should rightfully be considered IU material, which, for RPG adventures, we typically treat as Appearances rather than Sources. I'm not sure where this character appears in the adventure, but please be aware that if he appears in an IU portion of the adventure, the article should probably list Point Blank as an Appearance instead. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:01, September 30, 2010 (UTC)
    • Changed to appearance --Jinzler 00:46, October 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:30, October 3, 2010 (UTC)