Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jol Zackin

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Jol Zackin

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 19:50, October 21, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Dat relink...or two... Get rid of them! MasterFred^(Whatever) 03:30, October 22, 2012 (UTC)
2. Way to con me into another review, Cade. :P NaruHina ^Talk 19:00, October 23, 2012 (UTC)
3. If only Clone Wars era senators were all like this guy. Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 09:29, November 9, 2012 (UTC)
4. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:24, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
5. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 20:37, December 12, 2012 (UTC)
6. Linking wasn't great. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:15, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
7. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:15, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Cav

• P&T is unreffed. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:58, October 31, 2012 (UTC)
  • Woops - done. Cade Calrayn 21:05, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Toprawa

• As I told Exiledjedi previously, CT forums are not reference material. Please leave a manually-written reference note explaining the logic being used there instead. Reference 4 here worked well for that article. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:59, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
  • Done. Cade Calrayn 03:06, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
• It's unnecessary to repeat that he's a Human male in both the beginning of the Bio and the P/T, just that one or the other mentions it. I would suggest starting out the Bio saying "Hailing from the..." instead. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:28, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
  • Done. Cade Calrayn 03:50, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:15, December 17, 2012 (UTC)