- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Jimas Veltraa
- Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 04:01, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Heavy hung the canopy of blue, shade my eyes and I can see you.
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
- Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:54, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
- Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 04:51, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
- 501st dogma(talk) 21:25, November 4, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:12, December 17, 2013 (UTC)- Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 10:26, January 2, 2014 (UTC) 
CC7567 (talk) 06:46, January 4, 2014 (UTC)
Object
501st
Link to male in the intro."Although Veltraa held out valiantly, the Reliance was destroyed in the Mandalorian attack on Taris, with all hands lost." Please directly mention that the admiral was killed when the ship went down.- Otherwise, good work. 501st dogma(talk) 01:08, November 4, 2013 (UTC)
- Done. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 01:44, November 4, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
I'm concerned that "bravely" here is just a little too POV: "Although Veltraa and his forces held out bravely"And here, "valiantly": "Although Veltraa held out valiantly..."Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:37, December 16, 2013 (UTC)- Both fixed. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 03:05, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
Nitpickin'
Is his flagship's name "the' Reliance" or just "Reliance"? Solely based on the lead quote, it seems to only be the latter, while the article uses the former formatting throughout. Are there other sources that potentially prefer one over the other?CC7567 (talk) 19:32, December 26, 2013 (UTC)- It's the latter. My mistake. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 01:09, January 3, 2014 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:46, January 4, 2014 (UTC)