Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jester/Legends

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Jester

• Nominated by: CC7567 ^(talk) 06:20, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Read one, read 'em all.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 05:11, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
2. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 13:30, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
3. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 01:28, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
4. —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 01:35, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
5. Mauser^Comlink 00:35, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
6. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:57, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. IFYLOFD:
   • Biography quote is messed up.
     • Addressed.
   • "After the clone troopers returned to the base, Jester cleaned his blaster as his habit after every battle." Is this really notable enough to put in the intro?
     • Yes, because it's a "habit"; I don't see why not. It makes him different from the others, which is why I put it in.
   • Context needed on North and south towers.
     • Again, self-contextualizing until I see why it's necessary.
   • Explain why Cody and Rex would suspect there was a spy in the ranks.
     • See above...somewhere.
   • Are the nicknames for Cody and Rex really necessary?
     • See above for Gus. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:39, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
   • Nice work. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 21:13, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
2. Mauser
   • In the bio you should say that he was Jango's clone, born on Kamino and trained to be a part of the future GAR - all the same as for Chopper (and other clones too).
     • Addressed. CC7567 ^(talk) 16:20, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
   • Otherwise very nice. Mauser^Comlink 11:28, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
   • One more thing. Have you considered moving the article to Jester, and that one - to Jester (Carrack-class)? Makes sense to me. Mauser^Comlink 12:22, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
     • I might if I have more time later to get after all the redirects. I'll consider it. CC7567 ^(talk) 16:20, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
3. From the Council Chambers:
   • In the intro, you say that Punch vouched for him, but the body says that Sketch vounched for him. Which is correct?
     • Gah; good catch. It was Sketch.
   • Otherwise great. —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 21:11, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
     • Thanks. CC7567 ^(talk) 00:24, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 08:57, 29 July 2009 (UTC)